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rich-pa Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 317New Orleans, Louisiana |
hmmm, this poem had to be edited slightly for language content, nor have i ever seen anything of this nature on this site, so here it goes Went to the doc to get checked he told me my ears was wrecked "why?" he didn't know but i was near deaf and in the next breath recommended a hearing aid to me how'd this come to be? started racking my memory thinking pondering perusing and musing yet nothing came to me and this was permanent like a project tenant never to hear again properly -maybe i'll hit Jackson Square, buy me some gris gris hopped in my ride, radio on that's when things started to form new ideas began to dawn and i realized what was wrong like a concussion blow i musta heard one of ya'll whacked flows on the radio "freedom is just another word for nothing left to lose..." -janis joplin |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
rich-pa not sure I understand, but wanted you to know I have read. Hope you get your hearing back!! ME |
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Artistic Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 107Colorado/Rochester, NY |
Not completly sure if I understood... What I'm guessing is that you're saying you lost ur hearing due to playing ur radio loud? (Sorry, but I'm guessing here) Other than that, I liked your poetry format. Quite entertaining. ^_^ --Artistic-- "Dreams are the touchstones of our characters" |
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rich-pa Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 317New Orleans, Louisiana |
thanks guys, it actually has nothing to do with me being deaf or whatnot, it'sa more a statement against the same old, played rhymes on the radio and how they have a negative effect on people...clearer? "freedom is just another word for nothing left to lose..." -janis joplin |
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