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Open Poetry #14

Let Me Be

Maverick Wolf
Member

since 1999-11-13

Posts 94
Scandia, MN

0 posted 2001-06-26 06:04 PM

You won't lose your dignity
Let me give you your pride
Only you can free yourself
Let show you the way
The sun will rise tomorrow
Let me make it shine
You won't stop caring
Let me love you forever

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-06-26 06:13 PM

very nice

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

2 posted 2001-06-26 06:15 PM

to is very good
nice write

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

3 posted 2001-06-26 06:17 PM

You won't lose your dignity
Let me give you your pride
Only you can free yourself
Let show you the way
The sun will rise tomorrow
Let me make it shine
You won't stop caring
Let me love you forever
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Do that would you?..........

I so loved your poem .........so touching.

Thank you.......
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It's only me.......only me
I hope that would suffice eternally

{{to cross a sea of wonder, and hold close at heart all dreams}}

Secret Whisper
Member

since 2001-01-25

Posts 298
Through the Looking Glass

4 posted 2001-07-21 02:16 AM

If only it were not filled with love. I did like the write, though.

Nice piece.

"We also know how cruel the truth often is, and we wonder whether delusion is not more consoling."- Henri Poincare (1854-1912)

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