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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-06-26 04:55 PM



My Shadows

shadows shrink
they grow
back and forth
with flow
most disappear
in day light
but some stay
way after midnight
creeping through
cracks of walls
patiently waiting
for your call
there when you
do not see
yet, close
they are to me
I am
never alone
shadows make
that known
always with heart and
hand of care
forever to
remain there



Helen Slicker

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bslicker
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state of mind
1 posted 2001-06-26 05:00 PM


yes,it is time to call.
nice write.
  

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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RMW
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2 posted 2001-06-26 05:00 PM


Helen....Nicely done....and an interesting subject. Bob
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3 posted 2001-06-26 05:03 PM


yet, close
they are to me
I am
never alone
shadows make
that known


very nicely done... always do enjoy reading your words...
What are these things
that are chasing me
it seems a shadow
could it be
following me from
here to where
someday you'll know
my heart does care
But till then
when your eyes do open
this shadow chasing
is my way of coping



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4 posted 2001-06-26 05:19 PM


Good poem, glad to see you back doing such
nice work.

vandana
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5 posted 2001-06-26 05:24 PM


liked it I always enjoy reading your poetry
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6 posted 2001-06-26 06:26 PM


the shadows will always be there. . .

wonderful. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

MyEnchanted_Melody
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
7 posted 2001-06-26 06:29 PM




Shadows linger.......
Shadows......we know they are there
Yet.....we stare
.........we pray for them to go away


Lovely........and made me bit uneasy as I must confess the gloom I feel with shadows though they could be real.

Thank you
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8 posted 2001-06-27 12:30 PM


I am
never alone
shadows make
that known
always with heart and
hand of care
forever to
remain there

Some shadows aren't sinister...wanting only that you know they'll always be there for you.  I hope it's these you write of.  Well done!  And, btw...nice to see a lady always finds a way.

1slick_lady
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9 posted 2001-06-27 12:34 PM


yes they are the ones ....ty.....these are the "best" kind...helen
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