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ParisGrl
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since 2000-06-01
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0 posted 2001-06-26 03:59 PM


I am scared to death of you, but you made me realize a thing or two
I still love her although she doesn't love me but you creep me out
You want me to move in with you although we know nothing about one another
You say that you're in love with me but you're in love with the thought of want you want me to be

I called you up to find out about an alarm, not knowing my voice would turn you on or the fact that i made you laugh you would fall hook,line and sinker
we started to talk and you fell in love but i'm not in love with you......i'm not sorry either.
Please understand this and leave me alone.

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ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2001-06-26 05:38 PM


That's a very heavy notice....I hope it works for you!
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2001-06-26 05:45 PM


Sounds like you better not call any more...it just encourages this person...James
Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182
Netherlands
3 posted 2001-06-26 06:12 PM


Indeed, just don't talk to this person anymore and try some other company for your alarm.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
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Sven
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4 posted 2001-06-26 06:21 PM


listen to that voice. . . it looks like you are already. . .

great job. . .  

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Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
5 posted 2001-06-27 01:52 PM


Laura,

i am so sorry to hear about this
situation...i hope that it all works
out for you. as the others said perhaps
you should no longer talk to this person.
it doesn't sound healthy at all. i think
that if it continues you should really
seek help...at any rate, nice developing
poem you have here. perhaps work on the
flow. just a suggestion.
take care.
amy  

"but i see your true colors,
shining through...
i see your true colors
and that's why i love you"
~phil collins~

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