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RMW
Senior Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

0 posted 2001-06-26 01:43 PM

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To know your heart
As you've known mine,
And with this pure expression join
Our lips at last upon a chalice
Blessed by priests who did not notice
How we've judged our coming here
By counting others.
This sweet, this dearest taste of you
Revealed through wine that barely covers
Quiet love must I confess
This change in line
Not yet discovered?

RMW

[This message has been edited by RMW (edited 06-26-2001).]

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-06-26 01:56 PM

You'd best not....

RMW
Senior Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

2 posted 2001-06-26 02:01 PM

Sunshine....smiling....which? Just NOT? Or, not repent? Smiling. Bob

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2001-06-26 02:45 PM

Ah Bob....
your gentle wording style which holds so much in depths....

I once again am pleased to find you here...and enjoy your words

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

4 posted 2001-06-26 02:47 PM

Sounds so much like you and your love took much into consideration before lifting the chalice...

a wonderful write, an inspired read...

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

5 posted 2001-06-26 02:57 PM

Excellent arrangement of lines and words. Thought provoking read!

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

6 posted 2001-06-26 06:26 PM

Bob--A pure expression...yes, is simple and also profound.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

7 posted 2001-06-27 09:10 AM

Bob, you never fail to amaze me and make me think in analytical enjoyment. Write on my friend.

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

8 posted 2001-06-27 11:15 AM

I stand, mouth agape, for I cannot say an answer, for it is not my call...

I just know that all have fallen short, therefore, we are then commanded to repent that we may know forgiveness. So then, with a full searching of the heart, then...

Enjoyed this, Bob, read it twice, pondered thrice...at least.

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

9 posted 2001-06-27 01:55 PM

Perfect purity.

Cor

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