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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-06-26 12:19 PM


we endeavor so
painting word pictures of thought
echoing through time

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth


© Copyright 2001 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-06-26 12:21 PM


Brush stroked thoughts
on canvas of mind
display time's pallete

Enjoyed your words Interloper... enjoyed them a great deal...

as for being a rascal..( grinning) not in the way it might sound..


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2 posted 2001-06-26 12:25 PM


Ron ~
deny ever more
for the public to consume
I grin privately

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3 posted 2001-06-26 12:29 PM


I am delighted...

regards,
sudhir

"I was born intelligent - education ruined me"

VAS
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4 posted 2001-06-26 12:30 PM


like ripples on water
span out quite silently as
words we say in mime


enjoyed your work, here, Interloper, and the strain it's begun, I hope it keeps right on

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5 posted 2001-06-26 12:33 PM


InterLoper~

In poetic thought
Echo  Echo  Echoing
One stroke at a time


~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                               noles1@totcon.com             

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6 posted 2001-06-26 12:36 PM


Sudhir ~ Thanks for stoppong by my friend

VAS ~
widening ripples
from epicenter of thought
diminish with time

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth


Interloper
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7 posted 2001-06-26 12:38 PM


Marge ~
poetic echoes
replying and repeating
with each tick of time

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth


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with you
8 posted 2001-06-26 02:19 PM


with each tic of toc
our words strive to stop the clock
wanting to remain

~*~

forever written
our future, present and past
framing each moment

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9 posted 2001-06-26 02:20 PM


enjoy
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10 posted 2001-06-26 02:21 PM


Interloper...I'm just here to clap and read. Well done, and all you other folks too. Bob
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11 posted 2001-06-26 03:33 PM


Oh yes we do endeavour.....we strive to capture virtuality at it's finest!      Good write!
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12 posted 2001-06-26 03:38 PM


Excellent!

"Lose your temper and you lose a friend; lie and you lose yourself."
~ Hopi ~

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13 posted 2001-06-27 09:18 AM


SEA ~
these words written in
hickery dickery verse
chime in heart's hearing

vandana ~ I almost always do  

RMW ~
Appreciative
applause, an approbation
appreciated

et ~ Thank you my virtual friend  

Mysteria ~
"excellent," she said.
though we don't really believe
we hope it is true

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth


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14 posted 2001-06-27 09:59 PM


Shoot I can't come up with a little poem that quick. But I like the way you did this. And everyone else too.
Sandra

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15 posted 2001-06-27 10:06 PM



Oh, I love this!  

Take care,
Melissa~

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16 posted 2001-06-27 10:12 PM


You say it so well.  Very nice, Interloper.  I do believe you have a knack for these.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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