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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2001-06-26 08:03 AM


Repost:

Petite Point Appliqué

Wind that whispers in the night
Secrets of a rose
Silver crested clouds in flight
Visions that impose

Shadows dancing lunacy
Round a maypole log
A moon that lights fantasy
Bull frogs in a bog.

Adding songs of interplay
Passing through my ear
Songs that sing and seem to say
Don Quixote’s here

The sweet smell of earth just turned
Rising from the mist
The suns golden rays returned
All beyond resist

Passing through the wind that’s there
Carried softly in the air.



© Copyright 2001 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2001-06-26 08:08 AM


Enjoyable imaegs and flow... glad you reposted..I would have missed otherwise.


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2 posted 2001-06-26 08:27 AM


Now ya know I love this!!!! There's just something about a maypole log that makes me all goosebumpy!  
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3 posted 2001-06-26 08:49 AM


Well if we are going to be allowed to pick out favorite lines....

"The suns golden rays returned
All beyond resist..."

YES!

Kit McCallum
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4 posted 2001-06-26 08:53 AM


I'm with Karilea ... what a wonderful phrase that is ... beautiful poem Sy, very nicely written!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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5 posted 2001-06-26 09:10 AM


This poem is alive.

"Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve"

Janet Marie
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6 posted 2001-06-26 09:18 AM


Wind that whispers in the night
Secrets of a rose
Silver crested clouds in flight
Visions that impose

=========================
The sweet smell of earth just turned
Rising from the mist
The suns golden rays returned
All beyond resist

Passing through the wind that’s there
Carried softly in the air.
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well who could resist this beauty...not I...
your gift for subtle, understated, succinct imagery is showcased in this piece so few words used, yet such vivid images painted for our minds eyes...
yer just so cool  
*winkiewinkie*

and me tired puter wont let me find a good Maypole pic to match this pretty poem  
but i found this cute painting for ya
later-color my world-gator
me



Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2001-06-26 10:17 AM


James,
Your pleasure is my pleasure. Thanks for the read.

Cpat Hair,
Big thanks.

Serenity,
Yea, croaking frogs. *L*

Sunshine,
Yes that makes sense. *L*

Kit,
Always enjoy your comments.

RSWells,
Thank you.

JM,
That's a gread picture, I just turned all the people to frogs. Winkiewinkie Stinky

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8 posted 2001-07-01 09:25 PM


Seymour~

'Adding songs of interplay
Passing through my ear
Songs that sing and seem to say
Don Quixote’s here'


You make music with your verse -
and then dance across the page.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~/b>

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9 posted 2001-07-01 09:32 PM


I always love to see "bullfrogs in a bog" included in a poem...and your french has never been better!  
Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2001-07-01 11:05 PM


Marge,
You say the nicest things. LOve and Kisses

Balladeer,
Bull frogs in a bog has such a nice ring to it. Thanks for the read.

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