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Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

0 posted 2001-06-25 11:51 PM

Lift me up on the wings of love,
Carry me high in the skies above.
Take me in the air so free,
Unshackle the bonds that you can’t see.
Free me from the earth’s hard grip,
Let me fly to the moon’s eclipse.

Lift me up on the wings of love,
Let me fly like the snow-white dove.
Soaring on winds of memories shared,
Always knowing you always cared.
Convey me to the clouds above,
Have them embrace me with your love.

Lift me up on the wings of love,
Merge me in the stars above.
As I glide, I see your face,
To shed a tear is no disgrace,
Show me the moon and sun once more,
Before I drift back to that earthen floor.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2001-06-25 11:56 PM

Lift me up on the wings of love,
Merge me in the stars above.
As I glide, I see your face,
To shed a tear is no disgrace,
Show me the moon and sun once more,
Before I drift back to that earthen floor.
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ahhh and you take us there with you in this serene write...
this is a butterfly poem for sure

beautiful Logan

I'm going crazy, I'm losing sleep.
I'm in too far, I'm in way too deep over you.
You'll always be the one.
You were the first, you'll be the last.

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

2 posted 2001-06-25 11:59 PM

What a lovely, fanciful love poem. I really enjoyed it.

Betty Lou Hebert

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2001-06-25 11:59 PM

this is sooooooo beautiful

I love the feel of this

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

4 posted 2001-06-26 12:30 PM

Janet Marie, then you have paid me a honor I will hold close to me..very gentle smile, gentle one.

Trillium, coming from you, this is high praise indeed, as well as you pen the words...gentle smile

SEA..you are too kind and I am indebted to your kindness and words for being here. I can only hope I can come close to the beauty of your words someday...gentle smile

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

5 posted 2001-06-26 01:24 AM

Such a soft poem Logan...full of love and desire...lovely

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

6 posted 2001-06-26 02:47 AM

Oh sigh....this was dreamy and soft, and a lovely journey.

"Lose your temper and you lose a friend; lie and you lose yourself."
~ Hopi ~

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2001-06-26 05:02 AM

Logan~
Gently soaring~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

8 posted 2001-06-26 05:36 AM

This one really soars just like the idea and the words portray the theme of the piece.... a very enjoyable read!!

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

9 posted 2001-06-26 09:37 AM

Yes, this is most beautiful. The soaring feeling, the hope for continued love. I suddenly can't write love poems..so I even more enjoyed reading this one.
Sandra

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

10 posted 2001-06-26 09:55 AM

Logan,
Good one enjoyed the read.

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

11 posted 2001-06-26 10:19 AM

take me up then hence, godspeed
lay me back with gentle need
and know that once, in our embrace
gentle hands touched your face

Thank you Logan, for allowing me to add a few more lines to this wonderful piece...you are a lovely gift of inspiration...

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

12 posted 2001-06-26 01:06 PM

Wow........what a lovely soaring journey you take us through.........

Yeah......
Lift me up on the wings of love,
Let me fly like the snow-white dove.

Lift me up on the wings of love,
Merge me in the stars above
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Thank you Logan sooooo much
***************************

Lisa
Member

since 1999-07-08

Posts 88
Lunenburg,VT USA

13 posted 2001-06-26 01:14 PM

I got chills when I read this. It touches something inside me. Thank you

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

14 posted 2001-06-26 09:26 PM

May you never touch the floor, and if you do, may that same feeling continue. I love this, Logan!

((hugs))

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

15 posted 2001-06-27 01:22 AM

Ahh Lady, your words make the whole poem sing, thank you for adding to it..gentle smile

Enchanted, Thank you for your kind words, glad you enjoyed...gentle smile

Lisa, gentle smile, thank you for the read, and your kind comments

Temptress, very gentle smile, you do me too much honor, you know..thank you, most gentle maid

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

16 posted 2001-06-27 01:31 AM

Sigh, I can't believe I lost most of my replies...not a gentle smile at all, geez.

Paula, thank you for being here, and for your kind words..gentle smile

Mysteria, gentle smile, thank you, always nice to see you

Marge, very tender smile..you are undoubtably the sweetest one..Love the dove..gentle smile

ethome, your words are always welcome, as you are..thank you for the read..gentle smile

Ahh, Sandra, very gentle smile, thank you for, once again, reading, glad that you enjoyed. Your words are always welcome

Seymour, I am glad you enjoyed. Thank you for being here and replying..gentle smile

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