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Poet deVine
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0 posted 2001-06-25 10:12 PM




There they lay
In trashbin black
My heart, your flowers
I threw them back

Don't feed me lies
I yelled in mid throw
You'll never have me
You'll never know

You asked me please
Forgive, forget
Well, buddy it ain't
Happening yet!


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.........wooo! You tell him! wow this is smokin!!  
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2 posted 2001-06-25 10:16 PM


this is th end
beyootiful friend

o yuh

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3 posted 2001-06-25 10:19 PM


PoetdeVine~
Whew !
If he didn't duck ... he's a dead one !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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4 posted 2001-06-25 10:20 PM


Sharon-
   WOW!!!  YOU GO GIRL!!!  
   that's tellin' it like it is!  

   ~vicky

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heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



Poet deVine
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5 posted 2001-06-25 10:52 PM


Can you tell my dander is up? LOL
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6 posted 2001-06-26 01:56 AM


A girl after my own heart, and stand your ground - you go girl!

"Lose your temper and you lose a friend; lie and you lose yourself."
~ Hopi ~

ethome
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7 posted 2001-06-26 06:17 AM


Well I get the message loud and clear.....Sometimes this is a must....sad but powerful!

Remember the Georgia Satellites......
"My honey my baby
don't put my love on the shelf.
She said, "don't give me no lines
and keep your hands to yourself."  

he he just a little spoof there!

Have a nice day!    ethome

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8 posted 2001-06-26 06:21 AM


Woohoo!  Message coming through loud and clear Sharon!  Powerful words, much enjoyed!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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9 posted 2001-06-26 07:03 AM


OH yeah - Them's fightin' words..!!..

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10 posted 2001-06-26 07:44 AM


Whoa Sharon... You go girl!

Thats tellin em phew.

Maree

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11 posted 2001-06-26 10:12 AM


enjoy
Poet deVine
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Thank you all!

and et, yes I know that song!! I love it too!  

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13 posted 2001-06-26 06:41 PM


got your dander up???  

I'd say more than that. . . LOL

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Fancy
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14 posted 2001-06-27 02:39 AM


...should be every woman's angry decree!!!...

"...don't ever stop loving, don't ever stop believing, don't ever stop dreaming your dreams..."
Warmly...
Fancy

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