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Poeminister
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0 posted 2001-06-25 03:35 PM


Seasons Beyond

Ever ope those inner senses
to the seasons beyond these
throbbing habiliments of Nature
we tread through the compounds
of chance determined bounds
that can't fully capture
our true bodies in motion
I believe we are
rays through change to the core:
ever bound without to die
ever bound within to fly
from the darkling sea
to an argentine shore...
in quest not fully remembering
yet in sooth not fully forgetting
our own answers to "why"
when the morrow comes;
descends age's night
fleeting is Nature's light
but beyond it we can feel
A whole lot more....

[This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 06-25-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-06-25 04:43 PM


I have read this three times....and in all sincerity, wish I could write like this...
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2 posted 2001-06-25 06:45 PM


this is where it should be. . .

well done. . .

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with you
3 posted 2001-06-25 06:55 PM


wow.....
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4 posted 2001-06-26 12:31 PM


you ope my senses
shrouded in habiliments
sewn seasonally

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