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MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

0 posted 2001-06-24 11:37 PM

I’m a word…
I could be
Lovely
Mysterious
False
Or true
My existence
Simply
depends on you

I could assault you
Ravish you
Or I could
tempt you
and take you away
to another day

I could give you
The colours
Of the rainbow
Or the flaming reds
Of hell
I could give you a kingdom
No one has ever ruled
Or
Ruined temples
Where faith was fueled
I could give you
Your dream
With songs
And sceneries
And enchanted
Streams
Or
I could give you
Nightmares
With hellish
Ghosts
And torture

I could…
And I could……
So unleash my power
And let me stand as
I should

Let me take your breath away
And with it make every chance
For me
to see my day
to know
my way
and sing forever
of the death
and the life
of me
that you alone
could see.

~~*~~*~~*~~

thank you.......
**************

It's only me.......only me
I hope that would suffice eternally

{{to cross a sea of wonder, and hold close at heart all dreams}}

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

1 posted 2001-06-24 11:45 PM

superb theme, developed fantastically!

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2001-06-24 11:46 PM

EnchantedMelody~
Uniquely refreshing !
Thank you for sharing !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

3 posted 2001-06-24 11:48 PM

MyEnchanted_Melody-
very cool!

i like this alot!!

~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

4 posted 2001-06-24 11:59 PM

Yanno, I wanted to sing it! go figure that one out it works great to music in my head, nice job on this one.

~*~ Tell someone you love them today, as tomorrow may never come ~*~

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

5 posted 2001-06-24 11:59 PM

~Vas~

I must confess that I have been captivated by this idea until words seem to be born by themselves.......

Thank you soooooo much......
=======================

dear ~*Marge*~

Thank you dearest for reading it......

======================

~vicky........

Thank you.....I'm glad you liked it.

======================

It's only me.......only me
I hope that would suffice eternally

{{to cross a sea of wonder, and hold close at heart all dreams}}

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

6 posted 2001-06-25 12:05 PM

Dear ~Mysteria~

It seems that you replied just as I posted my reply.......

Thank you for reading it........
What's the music that seems to go along with this one....... ?

I'm really glad to know that you have liked this one...........

take care......
****************************

It's only me.......only me
I hope that would suffice eternally

{{to cross a sea of wonder, and hold close at heart all dreams}}

Fancy
Member

since 2001-06-05

Posts 189
TN/USA

7 posted 2001-06-25 12:20 PM

...what powerful "words"!!!...

"...don't ever stop loving, don't ever stop believing, don't ever stop dreaming your dreams..."
Warmly...
Fancy

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

8 posted 2001-06-25 01:25 PM

Yes..........words are really powerful.

Thank you ~fancy~ for reading it.

***************************

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

9 posted 2001-06-25 03:23 PM

This is GREAT!!!
I love it...
reminds me of a song too
one of those "I am Women Hear me Roar" type songs LOL

Thank You
~~~Connie~~~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

10 posted 2001-06-25 03:24 PM

Very well done...we're going to like having you around here....

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

11 posted 2001-06-25 05:34 PM

~Zinsser~

I'm glad that you loved it.......
Thank you for reading it.

======================

~Sunshine~
As always my friend.......thank you dearly .......

take care

**********************************

It's only me.......only me
I hope that would suffice eternally

{{to cross a sea of wonder, and hold close at heart all dreams}}

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

12 posted 2001-06-25 06:51 PM

and that word would be "poet" . . .

there are just too many things here that I could tell you that I like. . . suffice it to say that your work has that unique Spiritual quality that just speaks to the heart and the soul of the reader. . . and that's what makes it great. . .

excellent. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

13 posted 2001-06-25 08:30 PM

Dear ~Sven~......

mmmmmm.......maybe

I'm thrilled that you think highly of my work........
I write from the heart and the soul hoping always to reach that of the reader........

Thank you again my friend for your kind words......

**************************

It's only me.......only me
I hope that would suffice eternally

{{to cross a sea of wonder, and hold close at heart all dreams}}

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