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MARK V SHELDON
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0 posted 2001-06-24 10:48 PM


Looking to the future,
I remember the past...
Savouring the moments
While they last.
So much in store
Yet so much gone by...
Sieze the moment!
Before it dies.

Opportunities
To be had
Take advantage
And you'll be glad
Time is something
That caonnot return
So use it now
And let others learn

Too many instances
Where plans went astray:
Chances were missed
Though regrets will stay...

It's never too late
To fulfill your dreams...
It's much easier
Than it seems.
Believe in yourself
And others will too
The future is yours
But it's up to you...


(Copyright 1988 by: MARK V SHELDON)

"If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn."

"Everyone can hear;  few can listen."

© Copyright 2001 Mark V Sheldon - All Rights Reserved
Love's Addiction
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1 posted 2001-06-24 10:52 PM


this i loved. nice job! thanks for the read.

I can't hold on.....how do u think i've lost so much?....i'm so afraid....-Linkin Park

MARK V SHELDON
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2 posted 2001-06-24 10:54 PM


Thank you, LA...  glad to share.

-MVS

"If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn."

"Everyone can hear;  few can listen."

Lone Wolf
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3 posted 2001-06-24 10:54 PM


Wonderful advice here, Mark.  We should all take heed of your wisdom.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

MARK V SHELDON
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4 posted 2001-06-24 10:57 PM


You know how it is, Lone Wolf:  easy to intellectualize and understand but quite the challenge to practice daily in one's life...

-MVS

"If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn."

"Everyone can hear;  few can listen."

walker
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5 posted 2001-06-24 11:09 PM


True words written here. I have go back to school to finish graudate school and I'm on the verge of making the decision regarding it, thanks for this one.Great poem!
MARK V SHELDON
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6 posted 2001-06-24 11:16 PM


Thank you for the kind feedback.  A "timely" coincidence, Walker:  I'm going back for my M.A. too, hopefully this fall.  Not much can be achieved without making a decision and following through with it.  Good luck to you.

-MVS

"If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn."

"Everyone can hear;  few can listen."

Fancy
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7 posted 2001-06-24 11:53 PM


...nicely written very positive thoughts...

"...don't ever stop loving, don't ever stop believing, don't ever stop dreaming your dreams..."
Warmly...
Fancy

MARK V SHELDON
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8 posted 2001-06-25 08:57 AM


Thank you, Fancy...  just sharing my beliefs.

-MVS

"If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn."

"Everyone can hear;  few can listen."

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9 posted 2001-06-25 08:59 AM


Well, Mark, again you give sound advice that is hard to follow. I truly believe this, yet my heart gets stuck in the past. I suppose it is because the present is so Non, that it is hard to live in the moment.
Perhaps the future will be better. Dreams are all thats left.
Sandra

MARK V SHELDON
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10 posted 2001-06-25 10:37 AM


I hear you, Sandra, believe me.  I'm all about the past, but I'm learning to "carpe diem" little by little.  If the past is gone and the future's not here yet, what do we have truly but the here and now?  I've got another poem for you to help put things into "PERSPECTIVE"...

-MVS

"If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn."

"Everyone can hear;  few can listen."

Zinsser
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11 posted 2001-06-25 03:34 PM


There that Time thing again
What is time anyway?
Is it the tick of the clock?
Is it Our life span
Or soul span
Do we get another chance if we mess this time up?
The only time I have is Today

Wonderfull Write
Don't Let The Moment Pass

           Thank You
         ~~~Connie~~~

JamesMichael
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12 posted 2001-06-25 05:21 PM


Always important to seize the moment for soon it is past and we have only regrets if we don't use our opportunities well...James
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13 posted 2001-06-25 05:24 PM


enjoy
MARK V SHELDON
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14 posted 2001-06-25 09:49 PM


Well, Connie, I imagine that time is what you make of it:  to some it is to be killed;  to others they don't have enough;  some try to beat it;  others try to get more of it;  in all cases, though, it teases us with its chortles, knowing that so far, it always has the upper hand over us...

Absolutely, James.  Easy to understand;  clear in hind-sight;  yet somehow a challenge to remember these things IN the moment...

Thank you, Vandana -- smiles are contagious, in a good way.  :-]

"If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn."

"Everyone can hear;  few can listen."

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15 posted 2001-06-25 11:35 PM


"Looking to the future,
I remember the past..."


yep....me too
I loved that part....
the whole poem is very cool, but the begining says it all for me  



MARK V SHELDON
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16 posted 2001-06-25 11:40 PM


I hear you, SEA.  Catch is not to forget about the part in between...  Thanks for your remarks.

-MVS

"If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn."

"Everyone can hear;  few can listen."

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