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Soft Of Night .... Moon Of Morn
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Soft Of Night .... Moon Of Morn |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Soft Of Night .... Moon Of Morn ~*Marge Tindal*~  In soft caress of night .... On sinking moon of morn I will beckon to your light .... In glowing of soft adorn You will find me waiting .... Beyond the hidden glen Gently anticipating .... Knowing you as best of friend Moment turns to rapture .... Holding you in my arms Far past the capture .... Held within your charms We'll be, as we've been .... Best lovers, best friends Best lovers, best friends .... We'll be, as we've been ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Oh Marge- i absolutely, positively LOVE this!!  such a tender and beautiful write...i just have to go read it again...and again...and... love the pic too.. love and hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
serene o yuh! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
I love the picture!! This flows superbly, Marge. Great work! All writing comes |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Marge this is very nice. I like what you say. "Best lovers, best friends .... We'll be, as we've been" One could not ask for anything more. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ I'm sure you'll recognize Mona and Callie in this piece ... They teamed up on me !  They will love knowing you enjoyed it so. Walt~ Thanks, sweetie. LoneWolf~ Thank you. It was a battle of the muses at their mushy best ... Glad to know you like it. INot2B~ I agree ... and I thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl, Perfect dearest heart, absolutely perfect. You haven't dropped so much as a beat in this, truly sweet sis this is superb, And now I'm off to bed, yes I'll take care and I'll take this with me. Goodnight sweet sister Love and warm stuff Mushy    Take back the hope you gave,- I claim |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: Your poetry always has an aura of beauty, no matter what the subject matter. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Yes, you will be as you have been, and boy, this was sure mushy! That old moon sure brings out the romance in you doesn't it, thank goodness it goes down and the sun comes up! Kidding aside, this was loverly! ~*~ Tell someone you love them today, as tomorrow may never come ~*~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
SPRINKLES!!!!!! YOU KNOW I LOVE SPRINKLES!!!  Yeppers...I bet Callie brought the sprinkles well youre too cool for school on this one Margie... waycool and clever format and rhyme pattern..2 poems melded perfectly... ahhh yes tis the gift of sprinkles meI'm going crazy, I'm losing sleep. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarshaLove~ I just knew the mushy muses would flush you out ! Thank ya', lovie ... sleep well ! Take care of YOU ! BettyLou~ What a kind and lovely thing to say. Thank you so much. Mysteria~ Okay, party girl ! 'Bout time you showed up ! Glad ya' liked my mushy muses ! Mona and Callie ... meet Mysteria ! JanetMarie~ A sprinkle .... of sprinkles .... just for YOU ! I knew you'd like it ! WayCool, indeed ! Give Cowboy a  *kissie* for me !~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I've read this as separate poems and read it as one... and anyway I read it, I love it... and hope. *S* Beautiful, Marge! |
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lunatic Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 172 |
Did someone call my namesake? I saw you guys in the "hidden glen." Can't hide from the man-in-the-moon aka luna-tic And I saw you write this ... you probably noticed the moon set early that morn ... it happens everytime I sigh too greatly. Let thy moon arise. William Blake |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SuthernGal~ Awwwwwww ! Thank you, hon. I hope too ! LunaTic~ How perfect is your reply ??? Close enough for me .....  Thank you, Luna~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
 -ing this one, cause Delaney said so !  She just discovered ~Poet's "word-moons" and LOVES THEM !!! Now just why does that make me a happy ~Poet ? *Huglets*  ~*Delaney's Poet*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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