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Soft Of Night .... Moon Of Morn

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Marge Tindal
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Soft Of Night
.... Moon Of Morn
~*Marge Tindal*~

In soft caress of night .... On sinking moon of morn
I will beckon to your light .... In glowing of soft adorn
You will find me waiting .... Beyond the hidden glen
Gently anticipating .... Knowing you as best of friend
Moment turns to rapture .... Holding you in my arms
Far past the capture .... Held within your charms
We'll be, as we've been .... Best lovers, best friends
Best lovers, best friends .... We'll be, as we've been

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2001 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 06-24-2001 09:11 PM       View Profile for vlraynes   Email vlraynes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit vlraynes's Home Page   View IP for vlraynes

Oh Marge-
   i absolutely, positively LOVE this!!  
   such a tender and beautiful write...i just
   have to go read it again...and again...and...
   love the pic too..

   love and hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes


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2 posted 06-24-2001 09:14 PM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

serene o yuh!
Lone Wolf
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3 posted 06-24-2001 09:36 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

I love the picture!!  This flows superbly, Marge.  Great work!  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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4 posted 06-24-2001 09:58 PM       View Profile for inot2B   Email inot2B   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for inot2B

Marge this is very nice. I like what you say.

"Best lovers, best friends .... We'll be, as we've been"

One could not ask for anything more.


Marge Tindal
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Vicky~
I'm sure you'll recognize Mona and Callie in this piece ...
They teamed up on me !
They will love knowing you enjoyed it so.


Walt~
Thanks, sweetie.

LoneWolf~
Thank you.
It was a battle of the muses at their mushy best ...
Glad to know you like it.


INot2B~
I agree ... and I thank you.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Margie girl, Perfect dearest heart, absolutely perfect. You haven't dropped so much as a beat in this, truly sweet sis this is superb,

And now I'm off to bed, yes I'll take care and I'll take this with me. Goodnight sweet sister

Take care
Love and warm stuff
Mushy
    

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning


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7 posted 06-24-2001 11:19 PM       View Profile for Trillium   Email Trillium   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Trillium

Marge:  Your poetry always has an aura of beauty, no matter what the subject matter.

Betty Lou Hebert

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Yes, you will be as you have been, and boy, this was sure mushy! That old moon sure brings out the romance in you doesn't it, thank goodness it goes down and the sun comes up! Kidding aside, this was loverly!

~*~ Tell someone you love them today, as tomorrow may never come ~*~

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9 posted 06-24-2001 11:30 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

SPRINKLES!!!!!!
YOU KNOW I LOVE SPRINKLES!!!
    

Yeppers...I bet Callie brought the sprinkles  

well youre too cool for school on this one Margie...
waycool and clever format and rhyme pattern..2 poems melded perfectly...
ahhh yes tis the gift of sprinkles  
me

I'm going crazy, I'm losing sleep.
I'm in too far, I'm in way too deep over you.
You'll always be the one.
You were the first, you'll be the last.

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MarshaLove~
I just knew the mushy muses would flush you out !
Thank ya', lovie ... sleep well !
Take care of YOU !


BettyLou~
What a kind and lovely thing to say.
Thank you so much.

Mysteria~
Okay, party girl !
'Bout time you showed up !
Glad ya' liked my mushy muses !
Mona and Callie ... meet Mysteria !


JanetMarie~
A sprinkle .... of sprinkles .... just for YOU !
I knew you'd like it !
WayCool, indeed !
Give Cowboy a   *kissie* for me !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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11 posted 06-28-2001 09:20 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

I've read this as separate poems and read it as one... and anyway I read it, I love it... and hope. *S* Beautiful, Marge!
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Did someone call my namesake?  I saw you guys in the "hidden glen."  
Can't hide from the man-in-the-moon aka luna-tic
And I saw you write this ... you probably noticed the moon set early that morn ... it happens everytime I sigh too greatly.

Let thy moon arise.  William Blake

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SuthernGal~
Awwwwwww !
Thank you, hon.
I hope too !

LunaTic~
How perfect is your reply ???
Close enough for me .....
Thank you, Luna~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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-ing this one, cause Delaney said so !

She just discovered ~Poet's "word-moons" and LOVES THEM !!!
Now just why does that make me a happy ~Poet ?

*Huglets*
~*Delaney's Poet*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - noles1@totcon.com

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