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Daniel J D
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0 posted 2001-06-24 08:20 PM



Upwards.

From the throes of despair
Raise me to hope's stair
Show me that someone does care
Touch my heart and wipe the tear
Then I'll understand that life is fair

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

© Copyright 2001 Daniel J D Ringuet - All Rights Reserved
whiskey
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1 posted 2001-06-24 09:39 PM


Very touching short verse, nice work  


Julie

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2 posted 2001-06-24 09:54 PM


Isn't that what we want?  Just someone to be there and show they care about us no matter what.  Those of us who are fortunate have a close friend who is always more than happy to fill this role for us.  Great write, Daniel!  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Daniel J D
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3 posted 2001-06-25 08:01 PM


Lone wolf, and Whiskey,
Thank you, for your comforting words.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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4 posted 2001-06-29 03:41 AM


JD~

'Upwards'

I like that title ... let's do it !  

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Charisma
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5 posted 2001-06-29 03:47 AM


yes upwards....we all need someone to care....eloquent spoken my friend

Charisma

ethome
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6 posted 2001-06-29 06:58 AM


Wonderful prayer! Give it time and it will be answered! All you need is a poet's heart!
Hey you've got one!

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