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Cheryl Flemming
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since 2000-09-14
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0 posted 2001-06-24 04:01 PM


I can't see
Am I blind
You took the blinders
Off my eyes
I can't hear
Am I death
Your soft and gentle whispers
Work magicness
I can't think
Am I crazy
You opened my mind
And knocked down the wall
I hide behind
I can't cry
You took the tears from my eyes
And replaced them with sunshine
I can't breathe
Am I dead
Your love flows through me
I am resurrect
I'm alive
Since you came into my life!
'


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-06-24 04:14 PM


You! work magicness....

this I enjoyed!

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2001-06-24 04:42 PM


Cheryl,
Interesting, enjoyed the read.

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

3 posted 2001-06-24 04:43 PM


very hopeful piece, I really liked this.

"This rose has seen red, I have been blue
I'm going to Ireland in 2002!" Kathleen.

RMW
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since 2001-03-21
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4 posted 2001-06-24 04:59 PM


Cheryl.....A joyful response. So much hinges with the word "since". Bob
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