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Poet deVine

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Hurricane Alley

0 posted 2001-06-24 03:37 PM

She lay alone amid the tangle
the girl with the misty eyes
broken in body, a lifeless spirit
‘the passenger always dies’

Pulled along just for a ride
she sat in front next to Ned
six teens out for a little fun
now five of them lay dead

A soft drizzle begins to fall
flashing red lights draw near
reflections of life still remain
in that one crystal tear

Life, so fragile, ebbs away
no one can stop it’s flow
rain glistens in misty eyes
that held a young girl’s glow

Interloper

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Deep in the heart

1 posted 2001-06-24 03:38 PM

All too often.

RSWells
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2 posted 2001-06-24 03:40 PM

I'll see that my twins who turn 16 in August read this. Thanks

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2001-06-24 03:42 PM

PoetdeVine~
So very, very sad ....
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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MARK V SHELDON
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In a corporeal internship...

4 posted 2001-06-24 03:43 PM

Powerful and thought-provoking. So many things in life "don't have to be", but we all too often don't realize this fact until it's simply too late...

-MVS

"If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn."

"Everyone can hear; few can listen."

vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...

5 posted 2001-06-24 04:07 PM

Sharon-
  wow...this is powerful!
  ...and so very sad.
  thanks for sharing this.

  ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

Mysteria

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6 posted 2001-06-24 04:34 PM

Yes a very powerful and good reminder to all, as at least our graduations draw near here, very well done Sharon, I hope parents will show this to their teenagers.

~*~ Tell someone you love them today, as tomorrow may never come ~*~

Balladeer

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7 posted 2001-06-24 04:36 PM

such tragic wastes of lives....so many teens never get the chance to live..

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

8 posted 2001-06-24 04:39 PM

To think ahead...takes but mere moments that the young believe they do not have time for...

well done deVine....

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

9 posted 2001-06-24 04:39 PM

DeVine One,
Wonderful write. Enjoyed the read.

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10 posted 2001-06-24 05:24 PM

Hi. Oh so true. Every day truths unfolded here....The reality of everyday tragedies. Written well for all souls to ponder.

~ShadowLost~

...and now these three things remain: faith, hope and love. But, the greatest of these is love. 1 Corinthians 13.13

Dark Angel
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11 posted 2001-06-24 05:39 PM

It is so terribly sad.

Great write Sharon

Maree

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12 posted 2001-06-24 05:57 PM

It seems that most of us knew kids either when we were their age or kids in our town that we heard about died this way. I knew some when I was in high school. So young and so sad!!! After reading this poem it made me begin to think about those I knew and I decided to say something.

~ShadowLost~

...and now these three things remain: faith, hope and love. But, the greatest of these is love. 1 Corinthians 13.13

walker
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13 posted 2001-06-24 05:59 PM

Two weeks ago,two boys died in a car accident the first graduation for a new Catholic High School 5 minutes away from my house.Tragic end. Thanks for sharing.

Waseem Cheema
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14 posted 2001-06-24 06:01 PM

Yes very sad.......but very nice written..Thanx

Elizabeth Santos
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15 posted 2001-06-24 06:02 PM

So hard to cope with this reality.
Your words sadly remind us
Liz

Poet deVine

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Hurricane Alley

16 posted 2001-06-24 06:20 PM

Thank you all for your kind words. We've had several deaths this way in the last week...sigh

MyEnchanted_Melody
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

17 posted 2001-06-24 10:59 PM

So sad.........yet carries truth.....

and you have expressed it sooooo well.

Thank you
*************************

It's only me.......only me
I hope that would suffice eternally

{{to cross a sea of wonder, and hold close at heart all dreams}}

Justbleu
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18 posted 2001-06-25 12:32 PM

Great poem about something soooooo very sad!!

Bridgette

Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side

JLR
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19 posted 2001-06-25 01:21 AM

A current topic...written well, as always. Perhaps you should be the PIP spokesperson on such matters. I will print this for a couple young people I work with. Thanks!

catalinamoon

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The Shores of Alone

20 posted 2001-06-25 09:44 AM

Sad, I wish this would not keep happening. So many young innocents lose their lives at the very beginning. Excellent message, Sharon.

VAS
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21 posted 2001-06-25 09:53 AM

your images are vivid and powerfully sad

Sudhir Iyer
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22 posted 2001-06-25 09:56 AM

Extremely sad...

Regards,
Sudhir

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Poet deVine

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Hurricane Alley

23 posted 2001-06-25 10:34 AM

Thank you again. It's tragic isn't it? There was an accident on the way to work today..they were pulling someone out of a car and though they were alive, it could easily have turned out differently. I hope everyone drives more carefully!!

illusion
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24 posted 2001-06-25 12:05 PM

I realize unavoidable accidents happen. But so often we see young people die, learning too late that they aren't invincible after all. I'd like your permission to show this to my nephew - he's just learning to drive. May I?

Poet deVine

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Hurricane Alley

25 posted 2001-06-25 12:13 PM

Please, anyone! feel free to show this to young people. I give my blanket permission...

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