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Sunshine
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0 posted 2001-06-24 01:23 PM




illuminati

sightings envelop
me
in you and you

him, and her

imagism
before me

shedding bright
prognostications

of potential
enthuse

adroitly skirting
all that was wrought

of exotic
sensualization

nonetheless, leaving
the bright
on

© Copyright 2001 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-06-24 01:34 PM


Karilea~

Tapered thoughts
concretely portrayed
prognosticating
amazed~

What's that you say ?
Spirits are walking ?
Yea ! It is so.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Sunshine
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2 posted 2001-06-24 01:57 PM


Marge...

it is indeed...

so...

Warm smiles, and many thanks!

Waseem Cheema
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3 posted 2001-06-24 02:00 PM


By God........  I am unable to understand it...lolo  
    

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4 posted 2001-06-24 02:12 PM


I don't know about you, but I enjoy the "day visits" the most.  You are definitely in the "quiet" today!

~*~ Tell someone you love them today, as tomorrow may never come ~*~

Lone Wolf
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5 posted 2001-06-24 02:32 PM


Wonderful write.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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6 posted 2001-06-24 03:00 PM


Waseem...see that English dictionary sitting on your desk...a valuable tool....I will not attempt to explain this to you now, until I know you've looked it up yourself!....now, busy yourself, and let me know what you find!...

Mysteria....day, night...inbetween the words...I enjoy them all....smile and be well...and thank you for reading...

Thank you, Lone Wolf....

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7 posted 2001-06-24 03:12 PM


That's one way to say it ... maybe the best.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth


Logan
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8 posted 2001-06-25 10:41 PM


Is not the bright on, so we can see more clearer? ..Well done, walker of the past..gentle smile
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9 posted 2001-06-26 06:53 PM


I can see them. . . can you walk with them??  Let's see. . .  

great job. . .

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Poeminister
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10 posted 2001-06-26 10:07 PM


Wonderful writing.  Enjoyed very much.

PM

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a step upon the road to heaven"
--Sir Walter Scott (from Marmion)

Martie
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11 posted 2001-06-26 11:22 PM


Thanks for making me smile.  
Sudhir Iyer
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12 posted 2001-06-27 11:25 AM


fantastic work, my friend...

regards,
sudhir

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13 posted 2001-06-27 11:30 AM


now this.... i truly enjoyed...


the form and the unsaid saying as much as the words written...

it is the unsaid..that so often speaks loudest


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