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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-06-24 10:34 AM



Parenthetically Speaking
~*Marge Tindal*~
        
While I fully understand the possibility
that some would see a need
for separation of their thoughts
parenthetically

They say perhaps I have a critter
that prevents me from replying
When you have (parenthesis) in your title
I keep trying - and trying - and trying !

Alas, to no avail
I cannot tell you I like your poem
So if you'd kindly not use them
on with the compliments I'd be going

That also includes those silly little [brackets]
and those funny {other thingies}
A simple - dash - accomplishes
the same idea without those wingies

It's only a little critter
that attacks Marge Tindal's replies
So if you don't see me, remember
I tried - I tried - I tried
        



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2001 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-06-24 10:42 AM


Cute rebuke.
Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2001-06-24 11:02 AM


Marge,
Lovable and cute. Hugs and kisses.

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3 posted 2001-06-24 12:01 PM


@#$$%^&**((())___)(*

CUTE STUFF
DO IT AGAIN

SHALOM

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4 posted 2001-06-24 12:03 PM


Ahhh...quite interesting!     I'll have to keep that in mind, Marge...thanks for the heads up!  Very cute write, as always, too!

sp  

I hopelessly, helplessly, wonder why
Everything gotta change around me
I’d tell it to your face,
But you lost your face along the way...

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5 posted 2001-06-24 12:08 PM


LOL...but what if the parenthesis is something like "dedicated to marge?"...
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6 posted 2001-06-24 12:09 PM


So if I have a {little} thought, you'd rather I'd {not} surprise you, by giving you a chance {or not} to change your mind? {You} wise you!

ROTF...Loving it!

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7 posted 2001-06-24 12:41 PM


RSWells~
Thanks.  I didn't think of it as a 'rebuke'..
just trying to let people know that this is a SERIOUS hinderance for me.

Seymour~
Thanks for your *hugs* and *kisses* sweetie !

SoaringEagle~
LOL !  You know I take this seriously.
It's trying ... very, very trying to be disconnected when there are parenthesis in the title ...
I've hired a 'critter-catcher' but it's been to no avail ! ! !


SnowPants~
Thanks, hon.
Cute ain't poot - when I can't reply !
I appreciate you.

Kaile~
That too !
Just a little - will do nicely.
Blah Blah Blah - dedicated to Blah Blah Blah
SEE DASH ? - - - - -

Karilea~
I love surprises ... but obviously my computer is parenthetically pathetic !
It's that unique thing again !
Thanks, gal !
~*Marge*~


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8 posted 2001-06-24 01:02 PM


Margie girl did I tell you today how WONDERFUL you are.

As always dearest sister you have written this brilliantly. Cute yes love very very cute.

I love it you know(I really really do)

Take care
love as always
Mushy
  

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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9 posted 2001-06-24 01:11 PM


Marge...my frustrated friend-
   you KNOW i understand how SERIOUS
   this problem is to you.
   i'm sorry that ANYTHING would have
   to get in the way of you enjoying
   your time in the forums.
   tell that critter-catcher to get busy!!  

   love and hugs to you,
   ~vicky


  

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



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10 posted 2001-06-24 01:43 PM


Well...I am sitting here laughing my head off that is what I am doing!...Do you know how many times you told me not to do this and I always forget?    I promise you, I printed it out and it sits right here to remind me.  I got it now!   Very, very cute!

~*~ Tell someone you love them today, as tomorrow may never come ~*~

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11 posted 2001-06-24 01:54 PM


MarshaLove~
Thanks, cutie !
Now be sure and pay heed ..
PARENTHESIS don't like ME !

Vicky~
Thank you, dearie.
It's nice to get a little much-needed sympathy !

Mysteria~
YOU'RE LOLing ??
Printed, huh ?
Do you REALLY think that will work ?
Me little 'DUH' friend ! !  
~*Marge*~

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12 posted 2001-06-24 02:29 PM


Upon the reading
of this write

I went back and changed my title
hopes that's alright.

I will refrain from using them again
And if i do, remind me when.
  

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

[This message has been edited by bslicker (edited 06-24-2001).]

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13 posted 2001-06-24 03:26 PM


So, what if I really have an acute need to speak parenthetically?  Should I use nothing "which, of course, would ruin the flow," says my muse just because it is a small hindrance?
OK, I won't
Speak parenthetically, that is

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth


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14 posted 2001-06-24 03:37 PM


BSlicker~
Thanks ... I'll give it a look-see.

InterLoper~
I would not wish to hinder you
from writing as you please
I'll just not be able to
... a sweet reply leave

But ONLY if the (parenthesis)
are in the (TITLE), hear ???
Am I hindered at all ...
from replying to those I hold dear !

Silly !  
~*Marge*~



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15 posted 2001-06-24 03:43 PM


Margie, girl, I beg you please
To forgive me my parenthesis.
They're just a circle split apart
To contain some thought I must impart
And there's no need to raise a racket
If I should use a little bracket.
Don't make me feel that I am hated
If some small words are hyphen-ated.
You think that it's a dirty trick
If I slip in some asterick?
Or do you think the world will crash
If I get feisty with a dash?
Don't let your nose get out of joint
By sight of exclamation point!
Come here to me, my sweet momma
And we will flow without a comma
Come down and take me by the hand...
Just you....and me...and ampersand  

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16 posted 2001-06-24 03:50 PM


Balladeer~
I'd &&&&&&&&& with YOU ... any day of the week and TWICE on Sunday !

WAIT !
This IS Sunday ....
WAHOO !

Ampersanding with Balladeer
Just my favorite thing ...
was gonna say 'trick' ... but couldn't think of a rhyme !
Loving each caress of him
makes my little heart sing !

LOVE YOU ... *HUGS*
~*Marge*~


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17 posted 2001-06-24 08:28 PM


Marge ,
Does this mean ( no it can't be ) that you will not reply to me ( for if it's so ) I'll just turn green (an uglier moose you've never seen )Well , there you go ( I hope that now ) parentheses ( you will allow )somewhat like these ( to keep the bull from
younger cows ) Can I still use them pretty please ? In my titles anyhow ?

Doc

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18 posted 2001-06-27 02:40 PM


ROFL... I'm sorry, Marge... I know it's frustrating. *G* But I'm just praying your computer doesn't take a hankering to sulk when it sees ellipses... JM and I would keep you crashing! *G* I do love your poetic plea phor parenthesis prohibition. *G*

BTW... sick rhymes with trick quite nicely. (eeeeeeeeeevil grin) Sorry, Deer one... just being helpful! *G*

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19 posted 2001-06-27 03:56 PM


It's funny how certain things about the written word turn us off.  This is another beauty Marge it made me smile as so many of your poems do!  Tha's half the battle to starting the day right.


The Grammar Lesson

A noun's a thing. A verb's a thing it does.
An adjective is what describes the noun.
In "The can of beets is filled with purple fuzz"

of and with are prepositions. The's
an article, a can's a noun,
a noun's a thing. A verb's a thing it does.

A can can roll- or not. What isn't was
or might be, might meaning not yet known.
"Our can of beets is filled with purple fuzz"

is present tense. While words like are and us
are pronouns - ie, it is moldy, they are icky brown.
A noun's a thing. A verb's a thing it does.

Is is a helping verb. It helps because
filled isn't a full verb. Can's what our owns
in "Our can of beets is filled with purple fuzz."

See? There's almost nothing to it. Just
memorize these rules....or write them down!
A noun's a thing. A verb's the thing it does.
The can of beets is filled with purple fuzz.

Yeah you're right Marge!....not a single parenthesis!

The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up
spaces of consciousness and resistance; to language oppressions; to
re-language historie

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20 posted 2001-06-27 04:26 PM


DrMoose~
*Sighhhhhh*
I tried to make it very clear
that I cannot reply
if those gosh-darned parenthesis
within the TITLE lie !

*Oh, well ... back to the drawing board.

SuthernGal~
I'm kinda partial to those little ..........'s myself !

LOL !  'Sick' wasn't what I had in mind ...
but I like it !

ETHome~
Okay .... I give up !
*Sighhhhhhhhhh*
I hate beets !

Now kids ... here it is in a nutshell !

My computer has an obvious glitch ...
IF you use ( ) or { } or [ ] in the
Subject area of your poem when submitting it-

Your UserName ___________________
Your Password ___________________
Subject - DON'T put parenthesis HERE

I cannot REPLY to it without getting disconnected.
AND because I don't like getting disconnected,
I no longer will attempt to try to reply those that have them.

Just was trying to let those who use them in the SUBJECT TITLE AREA that if you don't see me ... please know that I may have read it, may have enjoyed it ... and may have wanted to leave a reply !  

That's all ... case closed !
LOL at me !
*Hugs* to all~
~*Marge*~

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21 posted 2001-06-27 09:17 PM



Marge-
   Ok...so...I can use parenthesis in
   the TITLE of my poem...but NOT in
   the BODY of the poem...oh..wait..
   that's not it...i CAN'T use them in
   the BODY, but i CAN use them in the
   TITLE....WAIT...NO..that's not it
   either...but if i can use them in the...

   LOL...sorry my friend...after reading
   all the replies to this one, i just
   couldn't resist having a little fun..

   I GET IT!!...really i do!!  

   love and hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



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22 posted 2001-06-28 03:18 AM


heheheh yuh
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23 posted 2001-07-02 08:19 PM


OkayWicky~
You're so tricky
At least I know you got it ...
and *hugs* for doing so !

Walt~
Tee-Hee ... it's for REAL !
Oh ... Yuuuuuuh !
~*Marge*~

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