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Blackdrake
Member

since 1999-07-23

Posts 83
Depends on the day :)

0 posted 2001-06-24 02:38 AM

Your gaze fulfills my every dream
All endless and without a seam

Unnatural heat spreads throughout
My heart beats faster than i can count

But i am yours forever
I would not hinder your endevour

Even my soul cannot deny your existance
Your presence reinforces your persistance

For i Love thee
As you do me

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

1 posted 2001-06-24 02:46 AM

Blackdrake-
very tender thoughts you've penned...

enjoyed..

~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2001-06-24 06:59 AM

"Even my soul cannot deny your existance
Your presence reinforces your persistance"

Very nicely written Blackdrake ... lovely sentiments!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2001-06-24 09:44 AM

BlackDrake~
Such lovely thoughts.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

4 posted 2001-06-24 09:48 AM

Nice and lovingly penned.
Sandra

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

5 posted 2001-06-24 11:19 AM

Lovely

Thank You
~~~Connie~~~

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

6 posted 2001-06-24 11:58 AM

Beautiful romantic poem, so nicely written...I love it!

sp

I hopelessly, helplessly, wonder why
Everything gotta change around me
I’d tell it to your face,
But you lost your face along the way...

Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite

since 2000-03-06

Posts 3733
Michigan

7 posted 2001-06-24 08:11 PM

BD~ Loved the mix of words you used to
unravel one of the many mysteries of love...
a fantastic write~

Gemini
Senior Member

since 1999-12-15

Posts 1203
Wisconsin, USA

8 posted 2001-06-24 10:20 PM

This was very sweet.

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

9 posted 2001-06-24 10:23 PM

What a beautiful vision you have created here. Wonderful!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Fancy
Member

since 2001-06-05

Posts 189
TN/USA

10 posted 2001-06-25 12:28 PM

...a nice warm touch...

"...don't ever stop loving, don't ever stop believing, don't ever stop dreaming your dreams..."
Warmly...
Fancy

Blackdrake
Member

since 1999-07-23

Posts 83
Depends on the day :)

11 posted 2001-06-27 03:29 PM

Thank you .. My poems do not equal yours , but i will strive .

Mysterious is the shadow, walking down the path of light. ~~ ¥ ~~

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