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whiskey
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0 posted 2001-06-24 01:44 AM



I miss you more than you know
Each time I think of you I glow
A smile across my face it creeps
Inside my chest my heart it leaps
I find  myself in frozen stare
Each time in my minds eye your there
Day dreaming off into space
A picture of  your beautiful face
Your lips I want to kiss so much
Your body I want to hug and touch
A cheesy grin I do wear
Each time my mind takes me there
Hotness spreads over me
As of me inside you be

© Copyright 2001 Julie Nelson - All Rights Reserved
wayoutwalt
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1 posted 2001-06-24 01:50 AM


this is cool and i need cooling off bout now yuh
Poeminister
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2 posted 2001-06-25 12:14 PM


Lovely thoughts.   Enjoyed very much.
Sven
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3 posted 2001-06-25 07:02 PM


oh I like this one. . . hot and cold. . . perfect. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Fancy
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4 posted 2001-06-27 03:27 AM


...how you rolled with this flow...

"...don't ever stop loving, don't ever stop believing, don't ever stop dreaming your dreams..."
Warmly...
Fancy

ethome
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5 posted 2001-06-27 07:45 AM


It all happens inside and this is a good way to express it!  Thanks for sharing. I enjoyed the read!
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