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MARK V SHELDON
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In a corporeal internship...

0 posted 2001-06-23 07:27 PM


  Psychotic visions in altered states
         Desolate souls seeking mates
           Fuel injected systems move
Like a needle dropped upon its groove
           Tribes begin to congregate
  The rhythmic thunder serves as bait
                 Repetition nauseates
          With the tension it creates
      Striving to maintain the stares
          Acting like somebody cares.

(Copyright 1993 by: MARK V SHELDON)

"If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn."

"Everyone can hear;  few can listen."

© Copyright 2001 Mark V Sheldon - All Rights Reserved
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The Shores of Alone
1 posted 2001-06-23 09:57 PM


Sounds like a place I used to go to. I like the style of this.
Sandra

MARK V SHELDON
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In a corporeal internship...
2 posted 2001-06-23 10:01 PM


Sandra, perhaps it's one and the same...  It's the kind of place from which I couldn't escape fast enough...

-MVS

"If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn."

"Everyone can hear;  few can listen."

Zinsser
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Calif.
3 posted 2001-06-24 10:58 AM


Mark,

Sad isn't it....
Lonely in a crowd
Connie

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2001-06-24 11:13 AM


Mark,
Interesting, enjoyed the read.

MARK V SHELDON
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5 posted 2001-06-24 11:17 AM


Yes, Connie, indeed.  Gives one a reality check in terms of the crowd in which they choose to "find themselves"...

Thank you, Seymour.

-MVS

"If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn."

"Everyone can hear;  few can listen."

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