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It's Still You
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It's Still You |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
It's Still You For you, so you will understand Where my love comes from Reasons I want you to be my man My first thought in the morning, you Wondering what you think behind those eyes of blue Wanting to be your breath, in and out Wrapping around your vocal cords as sigh or shout My mind wants to share every thought Ears long to listen when you talk Eyes take in the whole of you My lips have one thing they want to do I love your imagination Your my fasination Your intellect is never ending Never know whats next, whats pending My body wants you to open all it's doors Wrapped up in knots with yours No space for light between, just within In life and love a constant begin You draw me out when I'm mad You make me laugh like no one has No one could ever hurt me but you After all these years, It's still you By Connie [This message has been edited by Zinsser (edited 06-23-2001).] |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
A very lucky "you", to be sure. May love like this infect the world around us. -MVS "If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn." |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Thank You Connie |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Thank You Connie |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very nice, I felt this way about someone..once. Sandra |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Zinsser, Oh I like this one! I think I am going to send it to the love in my life right now... it reminds me so much of him. Thank you for sharing  TaraB |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
It's nice when you find somone you admire and you can offer your love to them....James |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Very romantic, Connie. Much enjoyed the simplicity of this beauty. All writing comes |
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Fancy Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 189TN/USA |
...these words just "ooze" with love...and I love it!!!... "...don't ever stop loving, don't ever stop believing, don't ever stop dreaming your dreams..." |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Sandra Thank You Maybe it will happen again Tara That is a high remark That you would send this to your love Thanks James Yes it is Thanks Lone Wolf I Thank You I like to keep things simple Fancy Thank You Glad you Liked Thank You |
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