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Victoria
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0 posted 2001-06-23 04:18 PM


You are emerald and I am the sapphire
we are turquoise, chemistry within the sea
I feel blue, withered blue, without you
paint me emerald, paint me turquoise with love.

We make love within the bed of the ocean
our kisses swirl in sheets of ivory sands
I am mystic pink, You are lobster red
we blend secretly within the coral reefs

I am the froth within waves of contentment
you are the salt lingering upon my lips
we are the bouquet within shoals of night
intoxicating, seducing, each other

I am your loofah, let me bathe you in the tides
Forever basking in the reflection of pharos light.



Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

                                            Pablo Picasso


[This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 06-24-2001).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-06-23 04:20 PM


Victoria...thank you for the stroll by the shore....
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2 posted 2001-06-23 05:01 PM


Very vivid and beautiful!
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3 posted 2001-06-23 06:14 PM


"A am the froth within waves of contentment.
You are the salt lingering upon my lips."
Like the way you wrote this Victoria...James

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4 posted 2001-06-23 07:21 PM


Vic, you always make things sound so lovely and colorful. And romantic. Do you know something I don't?  
Sandra

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5 posted 2001-06-24 09:56 AM


thank you sunshine sodpossum james and sandra..happy to hear from you all...  

                    ~Victoria~


Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

                                            Pablo Picasso

[This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 06-24-2001).]

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6 posted 2001-06-29 03:27 AM


Victoria~

'I am the froth within waves of contentment
you are the salt lingering upon my lips
we are the bouquet within shoals of night
intoxicating, seducing, each other'


How very pretty ...
~*Marge*~


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7 posted 2001-06-29 07:02 AM


Victoria you always seem to fill many of your poems with vibrant colors...this is no exception....beautifully written

I was wondering about loofah   and Webster's Dict tells me.." a sponge consisting of the fiborus skeleton of a gourd"......very interesting!

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8 posted 2001-06-29 08:20 AM


Marge..thank you so much for reading again..glad you enjoyed sweet Marge ha..

ethome..thank you for your comments..yes a loofah may be used to bathe and exfoliate the skin. im sure you have seen them ..just didnt know what they were ha..

             ~Victoria~

                    

Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

                                            Pablo Picasso


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9 posted 2001-06-29 09:01 AM


passionate blends of color
and image.. I enjoyed!

Victoria
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10 posted 2001-06-29 12:19 PM


thank you Pat..glad you enjoyed

                    ~Victoria~

Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

                                            Pablo Picasso


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11 posted 2001-06-29 01:11 PM


ah, now this is so you Victoria. . . wonderful colors and images. . .

excellent. . .  

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Victoria
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12 posted 2001-06-29 05:40 PM


Thank you sven...happy you enjoyed..nice to hear from you as always..

                 ~Victoria~

                

                      

Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

                                            Pablo Picasso


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