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Ladycat
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At the edge and a doorway,TX

0 posted 2001-06-23 02:28 PM


This is for the rebel that taugh me how to be the only person that I never wanted to be and the person that I always wanted to be at the same time.  Thank you Jimmy...

Locking eyes on a dark street corner
We are sent into the zone of desulsionment
Silly, you believed that we could exsist peacefully
Our mistake
Wrap me in your sorrow and shame
Suddenly your pain will become my pleasure
As we sail off together on our flaming boat of passion
I let loose my hatred on you
You tell me of my dreaded death, yet we find other rather appealing in a round about kind of way
There you left me begging for everlasting life
Maybe that was too much to ask for though
I spit in your face of rebellion
You wiped yourself clean and walked away
The dust from your boots hitting the road slapped me in he face
Road rough and cold
The realization that bliss will never be the same without you finally flitered in my life
For the first time ever, I truely felt alone

Love,
Ladycat



Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured.

[This message has been edited by Ladycat (edited 06-23-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Vynette M. Charles-Brooks - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-06-23 05:46 PM


It certainly is a treat when I get to read your stuff. The lead up to the realization here was great. I love this.
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2 posted 2001-06-23 05:49 PM


Full of emotion!Loved it!
Zinsser
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Calif.
3 posted 2001-06-23 06:07 PM


Love and Hate....

Good Write
Thanks
Connie

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