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BlueSapphiregrl
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since 2001-06-23

Posts 1

0 posted 2001-06-23 04:32 AM

You walked into my life ten-years ago
Now I am finding I have to let you go
So many things have been said
So much of which I really dread.

It's so hard to let you go
My Husband, My Lover, My Best Friend
Should of held onto what I had, so you said
Now for the rest of my life
that I will dread

You made me laugh
You made me cry
Made me happy
Gave me two great kids
Had some good times
Had some bad
That life I spent with you,
I'll never dread.

You walked into my life ten-years ago
Now without looking back you've walked away
and said goodbye

I will miss you
My Husband, My Lover, My Best Friend
I shouldn't of let you go
Til' the day I die
For that I will dread!

Waseem Cheema
Member

since 2001-03-16

Posts 369
Pakistan

1 posted 2001-06-23 04:46 AM

Very nice written.....
Welcome to passion

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2001-06-23 07:01 AM

Welcome to Passions. A sad first write, but we hope you will find some comfort here among us. Please, check your e-mail for a special message!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ

rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

3 posted 2001-06-23 07:20 AM

BlueSapphiregrl,

Welcome to Passions! I hope you like your stay.. it is a great place to write your pain away..

Great first poem.. sad but it's a good one.

TaraB

Severn
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since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

4 posted 2001-06-23 09:01 AM

Welcome...very very sad

Glad you found us...

K

[This message has been edited by Severn (edited 06-23-2001).]

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2001-06-23 09:09 AM

Blue,
Welcome and well done.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

6 posted 2001-06-23 10:27 AM

Welcome to Poetry Land...
nice to have you here...
this is a sad sincere and lovely express...
we heal as we write...and youre in the perfect pplae here to find your words.
take care
jm

OLIAS
Senior Member

since 2000-06-20

Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa

7 posted 2001-06-23 10:31 AM

Very sad poem but powerfully written a great first post, welcome to Passions, I hope to read more of your work. Take care.

Regards,
Olias.

Mother_Earth
Senior Member

since 2000-11-20

Posts 1370
1/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan

8 posted 2001-06-24 11:27 AM

Welcome to PIP. You have written a very powerful poem.....what if's and I wish...have a way of going through your mind day and night. Try, my dear, to live each day as it comes and let the "yesterdays" fade away. You said you have 2 little ones, so do all you can to make their lives complete. Each minute with them is something that can never be taken from you. Hugs, ME

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