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serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2001-06-23 04:15 AM

It's all been done.
I wrote last word.
So much I spoke
with nothing heard.
Every verse
a piece of heart
thoughts disperse--
to think, love--ART.

Nothing left
that I can say
All my love
I wrote away
Everyday
another page
Everynight
a passion's rage.

I surrender--
wave white flag
remembering
the dreams I had--
heart's December
bitter frost
even now I
pay the cost
again, again
I'd pay the toll
rollercoaster
wake my soul.

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

1 posted 2001-06-23 04:40 AM

serenity-
   wow...this just aches.

       "It's all been done.
         I wrote last word.
         So much I spoke
         with nothing heard"

   i hear you, my friend...

hugs to you,
~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

[This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 06-23-2001).]

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2001-06-23 04:48 AM

SweetSerenity~
What a rollercoaster ride of poet voice you take us on.

Highs - lows ... and a thrill-a-minute around the next curve !
Hanging on for dear life, I am ....

Love ya'
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-06-23 10:32 AM

and then what happens when the "heart's December" becomes the "heart's July"?

well done my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2001-06-23 10:34 AM

It's all been done.
I wrote last word.
So much I spoke
with nothing heard.
Every verse
a piece of heart
thoughts disperse--
to think, love--ART.

Nothing left
that I can say
All my love
I wrote away
Everyday
another page
Everynight
a passion's rage.
=========================

and I inhale every line..
and in between the words of gifted rhyme ...
I see a reflection...(mine)
let nothing nor no one take your words
for they are some ...
of the most beautiful ever heard.

Love ya me twin...

me

I'm going crazy, I'm losing sleep.
I'm in too far, I'm in way too deep over you.
You'll always be the one.
You were the first, you'll be the last.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2001-06-23 10:35 AM

Serenity,
As always enjoyed the read. *L*

OLIAS
Senior Member

since 2000-06-20

Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa

6 posted 2001-06-23 10:40 AM

Very sad words, and very true but there is always tommorrow that page has not yet been written, Take care.

Regards,
Olias.

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

7 posted 2001-06-23 10:50 AM

Theres always tomarrow...
Part 2

very well done
Connie

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