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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-06-23 01:37 AM

Dance of You

morning do not take him
this time you’ve come too soon
leaving me with echoes
from the corners of the moon

immersed in velvet darkness
shimmering shadows dance
upon smooth satin sand
dreamers still romance

arms with strength embrace me
gliding timed steps till dawn
dissolves music when morning comes
evaporating dance floor withdrawn

sun light is much too stark
star lit dances stop much too quick
our waxen moon soon melts
from torch of sun’s wick

yet, I shall wait for you again
counting petals in garden twilight
engulfing in the dance of you
my midnight highlight

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare

JLR
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since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

1 posted 2001-06-23 01:40 AM

Dance...and be free. Beautiful!

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-06-23 02:06 AM

truly beautiful!

Waseem Cheema
Member

since 2001-03-16

Posts 369
Pakistan

3 posted 2001-06-23 02:28 AM

yet, I shall wait for you again
counting petals in garden twilight
Very Beautiful

gw-gal
New Member

since 2001-06-23

Posts 2

4 posted 2001-06-23 03:03 AM

I'd love to have a dance like this, before the clock says it's 8 o-clock. very nice 1slick_lady =)

ThUnDeRkYsS
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since 1999-09-23

Posts 727
Wisconsin

5 posted 2001-06-23 03:36 AM

Very nice I must say, great imagery.

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

6 posted 2001-06-23 03:58 AM

Helen,

I really liked this a lot. I believe it's some of the best of your writing that I've read.

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the human mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

Fancy
Member

since 2001-06-05

Posts 189
TN/USA

7 posted 2001-06-23 04:04 AM

...a lovely imagery...

"...don't ever stop loving, don't ever stop believing, don't ever stop dreaming your dreams..."
Warmly...
Fancy

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2001-06-23 10:38 AM

helen, the flow of this is absolutly amazing. . . you've really found it with this one. . .

I feel like dancing now!!!

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

OLIAS
Senior Member

since 2000-06-20

Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa

9 posted 2001-06-23 10:45 AM

I like this very much wonderful imagery and emotion, it walks the line between sadness and joy very well. Thank you for sharing.

Regards,
Olias.

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

10 posted 2001-06-23 10:57 AM

morning do not take him
this time you've come to soon
leaving me with echoes
from the conors of the moon
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Love It!!
Thanks
Connie

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

11 posted 2001-06-23 12:31 PM

What a way to end and start a day

helen smith
Member

since 2001-03-12

Posts 240

12 posted 2001-06-23 01:03 PM

I loved this very much

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