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The meek Junior Member
since 2001-06-22
Posts 16Australia |
I took hold of a secret, Handfuls of trust, Seeping through my fingers, It’s hard to hold on, So slippery, It’s burning my palms, I have to let it fall, Into another’s hands. We must read the lines before we read between the lines. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, once burned, then once learned...gentle smile, |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is gooooooood  |
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Fancy Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 189TN/USA |
..."burnt palms"...seems to be a common thread between many...I like this... "...don't ever stop loving, don't ever stop believing, don't ever stop dreaming your dreams..." |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
As a person who holds many confidences for various reasons...I find this very interesting... and am glad I've not yet been burned.... |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
A well done point. It is difficult to hold so much in sometimes, but it is something we must do for those who trust us. |
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