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The meek
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0 posted 2001-06-22 11:23 PM


Love is set across,
A vast mountain range,
Some wonderful sights,
But scenery can change,

It’s hard to find a path,
That can take you straight through,
A raging river over the horizon,
There’s nothing you can do,

The hopeful would swim,
The weak would just wait,
The strong would build a raft,
And take control of their fate,

There are many highs and lows,
Across the mountains that we can’t see,
And if you reach the top,
You’ll be happy as can be.

© Copyright 2001 The meek - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-06-22 11:26 PM


Welcome to Passions!  Please, check your e-mail for a special message!

Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




Janet Marie
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2 posted 2001-06-22 11:26 PM


A beautiful poem of wisdom and hope...
Welcome to Poetry Land...
so nice to have you here with us.
take care
jm

Poet deVine
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3 posted 2001-06-22 11:27 PM


Welcome to the family. I look forward to reading more from you.  
SEA
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4 posted 2001-06-22 11:38 PM


Welcome!   Very nice first post   looking forward to more    ~SEA
Severn
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5 posted 2001-06-23 12:12 PM


Lovely first entry...and lovely to have you here...  

K

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6 posted 2001-06-23 12:47 PM


meek,

  Welcome to Passions   You have a very good start.. I really like this! I can't wait to see more of your poetry

TaraB

Logan
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7 posted 2001-06-23 12:56 PM


Ahh, welcome to a family that cares..gentle smile, nice first, hope to see more soon
vlraynes
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8 posted 2001-06-23 05:39 AM


very nice first post!  
welcome to passions...i look
forward to reading lots more from you..

~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



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9 posted 2001-06-26 12:25 PM


I enjoyed this and look forward to reading more of your work. *S* Welcome!
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10 posted 2001-06-26 12:40 PM


Welcome to Passions.  I look forward to seeing more from you.
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