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Go gently |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Go gently the friend picked up the missive and read disconcerting words if ESP could gift a lift they were sent on thoughts alone “go gently” from most outward of perspective and gained inner knowledge a friend saw the despair circling an inward spire knowing that the sender, in all earnestness would only employ any encircling to make wider a life, encompassing even more in valued trust there, then, was the friend, caught up in the entanglement of a circle ever tightening threatening to strangle all light becoming the black hole “go gently” thoughts, glowing with well-being shimmered along the atmosphere of space and time a continuum that could be felt as light as the summer day’s breeze across a cheek “go gently, my friend” and in the moment of quiet the friend paused, heard a voice, felt the warm smiled a knowing peace and whispered thank you. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Well now I am not sure if entered the reaches of outer space or inner space in chaotic dream.... Nicely written, and I enjoy the word play in this.. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Wonderful poetry from your pen, O Lady In White... Regards, Sudhir "I was born intelligent - education ruined me" |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I know exactly what you mean with this Lady. Sometimes we can hear the soft messages whispered on the wind. Thank you, this is lovely.... On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
.......yes........... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Excellent advice and response. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Lovely. Cor |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Lady in white, enjoyed this journey that your words took me one. THis one speaks loudly while in whisper "Build a man a fire, he'll be warm for a day. Set a man on fire and he'll be warm for the rest of his life". Terry Pratchett |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
wonderfully written  |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Lovely reaching out. Bob |
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