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RSWells
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0 posted 2001-06-22 06:36 AM



My Love doth glide,
The air it rides
This Sunday afternoon.

The gentle rain
On window pane,
This day in our Love's June.

It's whispered tap,
Lured me to nap,
Mid reclining poem read.

So through dreamed air,
It traveled there,
To you, it felt your need.

Though message hushed,
Did thou feel my brush
Just a moment ago?

Dream't gentle hand,
The stance spanned,
Just wanted you to know.

That was I,
My Love doth fly
To touch upon your hair.

Tht lightness felt,
From Loves wish dealt,
Reminding you I care.



© Copyright 2001 Richard S. Wells jr. - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-06-22 06:39 AM


A nice reminder indeed   
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2 posted 2001-06-22 11:34 PM


Beautiful!! You have a very romantic style of writing. I love it.  
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with you
3 posted 2001-06-22 11:42 PM


this is so soft and sweet  
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4 posted 2001-06-23 12:46 PM


I loved this one, so gentle and the last stanza was so romantic you old softie you!

~*~ Tell someone you love them today, as tomorrow may never come ~*~

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5 posted 2001-06-23 12:54 PM


A lazy rainy day Sunday afternoon for me to think about as the weekend fast approaches    I treasure those tranquil moments of soft reflection...you've captured the mood perfectly.

"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you.
And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
~Winnie the Pooh

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6 posted 2001-06-23 01:11 AM


you do have a soft, sweet heart
RSWells
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7 posted 2001-06-23 08:08 AM


Geez thank you all! This is a grand departure from how I'm accustomed to being treated. I just received an e-mail from someone at the site I just abandon telling me how untalented and mean I am. Maybe I'm home here.
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