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Professor Gloom
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0 posted 2001-06-22 05:38 AM


“I’ve become too old for Dreams”

The day became too hot for the bird’s song,
In quiet she stopped her rocking along,
No other voice sings or measure to keep
So alone on the patio she’ll sleep.

From her chair, soft swirling in memories.

Shadows shorten to the height of the noon,
Reveals flowers who’ve taken time to bloom,
To air conditioned refuge she’s taken,
The summer garden for now forsaken.

Ever there, soft swirling in memories.

Cool drifts into her bones covered lightly,
Curtained sunlight still bathes the room brightly,
Thoughts slows back to a distant time and place,
When and where she dreamed with a youthful face.

Gloom



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nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2001-06-22 08:35 AM


never too old to dream...nice~

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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2 posted 2001-06-22 09:05 AM


Yes, this likes me very much....
Professor Gloom
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3 posted 2001-06-22 02:07 PM



Thank you, Nakdthoughts,
I am pleased you enjoyed.

Thank you, Lady in White,
Glad you like my words.

Gloom

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