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rosepetals25
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0 posted 2001-06-21 10:32 PM


This Love


T otally enveloping me
H ere in my heart… growing
I is now a part of my being
S saving me from myself

L eaves me longing for your touch
O pens my heart, giving me such freedom
V irtually changing who I am
E ternally interlocking our souls

TaraB

© Copyright 2001 Tara Baldridge - All Rights Reserved
wayoutwalt
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1 posted 2001-06-21 10:33 PM


You defined it well and penned it so
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2 posted 2001-06-21 11:05 PM



"eternally interlocking our souls"
I love that line - what a perfect ending!~

A wonderfully expressed acrostic!  
Take care,
Melissa~

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3 posted 2001-06-21 11:13 PM


wayoutwalt - Thank you I'm glad you thought so

Melissa - Thank you! I'm happy you enjoyed it Thanks for stopping in.


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4 posted 2001-06-21 11:13 PM


Wow, very pretty. Ain't love grand??  

"If my heart had wings, I would fly to you and lie.. beside you as you dream, if my heart had wings." Faith Hill

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5 posted 2001-06-21 11:15 PM


Jenn - You snuck in there on me! Thank you for stopping in.. and yes.. Love is the most wonderful.. confusing at times..lol.. but most wonderful on earth  

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6 posted 2001-06-21 11:23 PM


very positive....happy to see that from you  
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7 posted 2001-06-22 01:42 PM


Love this!!!

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8 posted 2001-06-22 01:45 PM


...Very Nice!!!
Fancy

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9 posted 2001-06-22 01:46 PM


NIcely done!!

To read the words
Heading thir meaning
Is the thing I
Strive to do

Perhaps in some
Open minded way
Everyone relates
More to Love


rosepetals25
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10 posted 2001-06-22 04:39 PM


Balladeer -   Thank you for stopping

Titia - Thank you!!!  

Fancy - Thanks for stopping in.. I'm glad you liked it.

Cpat Hair - What a lovely response   Thanks for stopping in. I'm glad you enjoyed.

TaraB

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11 posted 2001-06-23 11:06 PM


Wish I could do these.    Nice work!

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the human mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

vlraynes
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12 posted 2001-06-23 11:10 PM


rosepetals-
   such beautiful thoughts...
   very nicely done..

   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



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13 posted 2001-06-23 11:14 PM


Michael - You being the most wonderfully talented poet that you are.. I'm sure you could do an acronym Thanks for stopping in.

Vicky - Thank you I'm so happy you enjoyed it

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14 posted 2001-06-24 02:16 AM


Lovely!!

Nathan

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15 posted 2001-06-24 02:43 AM


This was a pleasure to read .

    Sweeet ..  

Mysterious is the shadow, walking down the path of light.  ~~ ¥ ~~



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16 posted 2001-06-24 07:04 AM


Lovely sentiments Rosepetals ... very nicely penned indeed!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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17 posted 2001-06-24 08:16 AM


Nate Dogg -  Thank you!

Blakedrake - I'm glad you liked it..thanks

Kit - Thanks for stopping in I'm happy you enjoyed

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