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Why do I feel ashamed for missing him?
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Why do I feel ashamed for missing him? |
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Front Page New Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 9 |
wanton for the fire he breathed only when he tried deceive gasp of spirit in my lungs from his mortal lashing tongue wanton for his guiding hand helps me better understand that I’m ugly, justified nightly beatings ‘til I cried wanton for his lusty mind any option he could find woman’s voice hangs on the phone is my handsome dear at home? wanton for his kiss, his taste we were young and full of haste wanton for a chance to see that I'd stay and he’d leave me [This message has been edited by Front Page (edited 06-20-2001).] |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family. This is so sad! Please check your email. |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Welcome to PIP! Though this is quite sad, you've written it well and I enjoyed the style a lot. Hope you'll be able to write through some things here. Sometimes, it helps. (btw, also understand the ashamed for missing part) [This message has been edited by JLR (edited 06-20-2001).] |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
You have found a new home, one full of friends. This was very well written. |
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Front Page New Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 9 |
Thank you all of you. I will try to get to each and every one of your poems. Hopefully in the after life I can catch up on it all. Overwhelming, yes? Ciao. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Front Page, Welcome to Passions  What a sad poem.. but so well written. I think you will like it here.. this place can help you through the most difficult times.. I hope you can find some comfort here TaraB |
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Fancy Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 189TN/USA |
...so many needs expressed with a sense of hopelessness...good writing... worth remembering: a need is never felt but what can not be fulfilled...keep searching, my friend... |
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Fancy Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 189TN/USA |
...so many needs expressed with a sense of hopelessness...good writing... worth remembering: a need is never felt but what can not be fulfilled...keep searching, my friend... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Welcome to Passions, yes, this is indeed very sad... "This rose has seen red, I have been blue |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Nicely done.. sad theme and filled with emotions |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! Karilea |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Very sad but well written. Welcome to Passions! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very well written, and sad. I understand also. Welcome to Passions Sandra |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Very sad...glad you found your way here... welcome...  KI am a refugee of logic...insisting |
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