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Zinsser
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0 posted 2001-06-20 06:55 PM



Yet To Share

Please don't let this be good-bye
We have so much yet to share
All the stary nights to watch
And funny old peoples clothes to wear

Far off sandy shores calling our name
With huts in the tropics for our body games
Coffee houses of all different types
To sit and ponder what others write

But most of all I would love to share
With out worry or a care
Our minds, souls and our hearts
What a shame it would be if we were to part

Connie McDonald
Nov. 2000

© Copyright 2001 Connie McDonald - All Rights Reserved
Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2001-06-20 06:58 PM


Please don't let this be good-bye
We have so much yet to share
All the stary nights to watch
And funny old peoples clothes to wear


This is such a tender plea...

enjoyed the words...

Michael
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2 posted 2001-06-20 07:06 PM


Sounds like you share much together...  I'm sure more awaits you.  Lovely sentiment.
Michael



Zinsser
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3 posted 2001-06-20 07:14 PM


Michael & Cpat
Thank You both so much
I never know what to say....
dshjdhklHIUR;KF   lol
Connie

Kit McCallum
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4 posted 2001-06-20 08:47 PM


"But most of all I would love to share
With out worry or a care
Our minds, souls and our hearts
What a shame it would be if we were to part"

Lovely sentiments Connie ... the tenderness and love flow sweetly in this piece, nicely done!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

bslicker
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5 posted 2001-06-20 10:12 PM


Ah growing old together,

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

JLR
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6 posted 2001-06-20 10:33 PM


Old peoples clothes, coffee houses, poetry, huts and body games...great images blended to yearning perfection.  Thoroughly enjoyed and so related!
Zinsser
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since 2001-02-27
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7 posted 2001-06-21 09:42 AM


Kit, bslivker, JLR
I really do appreciate
your comments and the
time you take to write
them...
Thank You
Connie

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