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lunatic
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0 posted 2001-06-20 06:16 PM



when one looks for bad
evil easily assumed
the innocent wronged

Let thy moon arise.  William Blake

© Copyright 2001 Man in the Moon - All Rights Reserved
Titia Geertman
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1 posted 2001-06-20 06:21 PM


OH WOW how true this senryu is.

Titia

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Cpat Hair
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2 posted 2001-06-20 06:22 PM


In negative eyes
truth clouded perception rules
and mind loses face


Nice piece Lunatic... hope to see more like it

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