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walker
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since 2001-02-11
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0 posted 2001-06-20 04:58 PM



My love walks alone on rainy nights,
longing to be with you.
It smiles when it's full of your touch.
It cradles in a small corner of you heart,
waiting to be loved.
It's broken every rule to be with you.
My love would do anything for you.
It's daring.
It's subtle.
It's simple.
It's complicated.
It's bigger than life, my love.

© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved
Fancy
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1 posted 2001-06-20 05:26 PM


..."it's broken every rule to be with you"...such actions I have been quite quilty of...your sincerity leaps out from your words...lovely
JamesMichael
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2 posted 2001-06-21 07:05 AM


"My love walks alone on rainy nights longing to be with you."  Wonderful expression of longing...James
BrightStar
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3 posted 2001-06-22 11:02 AM


*sigh*
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4 posted 2001-06-23 11:00 PM


How did this little gem fall onto the back pages with only three replies?  Loved it, Walker.  

Michael

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There is more depth to the heart than the human mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

vlraynes
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5 posted 2001-06-23 11:07 PM


walker-
   simply beautiful...
   enjoyed reading this..

   ~vicky

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heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



JLR
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6 posted 2001-06-23 11:40 PM


I've broken every rule to be with you...can quite relate.  Good one, walker!
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