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Cpat Hair
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0 posted 2001-06-20 01:45 PM



As tears dry and time
like the tide ebbs..

the flow of words
can leave stranded
the unanchored
heart...

What safe harbor
chosen for breakwater
and provisions is
not run over by
hurricane emotions?

Fly gale warnings...
or sleep oblivious
to the storms around.

the fury of the future
is hidden in the sound

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Decaflame
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1 posted 2001-06-20 01:46 PM


...hidden in the sound....

yes....

Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
2 posted 2001-06-20 09:55 PM


CPatHair~

'the flow of words
can leave stranded
the unanchored
heart...'


Oh ... this is good ! !
Let's kick it to the top for another go !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2001-06-21 04:20 PM


Whoa!  You've done it again.  Aren't you sick and tired of being so damn good?
You keep writing and I will keep reading my friend.

Cpat Hair
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4 posted 2001-06-21 04:23 PM


Deca: Yes it is hidden in the sound... thanks for the comment it is greatly appreciated.

marge: You are too kind. Thank You

Interloper: I aint good... just a hillbilly hack who likes the sound of words...
Thanks for the nice words!!

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
5 posted 2001-06-21 05:07 PM


I love the sound of your words *s

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



Cpat Hair
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6 posted 2001-06-21 05:08 PM


Nakdthoughts... you are kind.. thank you
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