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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-06-20 12:50 PM


and she said to him,
"just put your lips together
and blow…"
Taken out of context
might conjure
dark, shadowy thoughts.
Time cannot be saved.
It is a lost commodity
every second.
Why waste such a valuable
necessity with inquisitional
prying
and innuendo?


© Copyright 2001 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-06-20 12:57 PM


Ah why indeed.... enjoyed the transition from the beginning to the end with delivery flawless....


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2 posted 2001-06-20 01:29 PM


Well, I know what she meant  
this is great my friend  

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3 posted 2001-06-20 01:50 PM


Yes, I agree. It's like wasting time trying to beat a dead horse...why would anyone want to do that, either???
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4 posted 2001-06-20 01:50 PM


Eavesdrop not on I
you might miss what I said, then
to say it again

might allow the miss
of opportunity's bliss
just whistle, I'll know

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5 posted 2001-06-20 01:57 PM


Ron ~ Thank you my friend.

SEA ~ Of course you would know.  You are a positive thinker  

Balladeer ~  Oh, did a horse die?  Was it beaten to death or shamed by it's braying cousins?  "Methinks thou doth protest too much" to borrow a phrase from a gr8 bard

Decaflame ~ I'm afraid I can't pucker right now.  I'm either too scared or I can't keep a straight face

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6 posted 2001-06-20 02:14 PM


straight face....LOL now I can't pucker.....ROFLMAO......and yes, I'm positive you are awesome  
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7 posted 2001-06-20 02:16 PM


Hehehe..this was good. People do take that innocent phrase out of context don't they?  

Jenn

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8 posted 2001-06-20 02:40 PM


Good write Interloper

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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9 posted 2001-06-20 02:51 PM


SEA ~ You go gal  

Jenn ~ I think your first visit to my work.  welcome and thank you  

Bernie ~ Thank you, and thanx for the read  

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