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. . . Emerald eyes . . . |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
your emerald eyes bottomless orbs entrancing inviting my soul Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
"bottomless orbs entrancing" I like how you think that way! |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
You said a lot with just three lines. I have the attention span of a 3 year old during a church service so these are the kind of poems I like. lol Wonderful poem you've written. Thanks for sharing.  "...if you want love you must be love.." Billy Corgan, Smashing Pumpkins Freedom comes when you learn to live unafraid. [This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (edited 06-20-2001).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I knew I would love this just from the title alone... and I do...I do ...  |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Reminds me of my "Emeraldic Eyes" one. The most enchanting color. Very very nice. PM |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nice.... inspires me to think of emerald as well... I enjoyed! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
et ~ Now who's spreading rumors that I think? Dark enchantress ~ Me, too. That's one reason I write senryus Janet Marie ~ Thank you, thank you Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
PM ~ Sorry, I almost missed you. Thanx Cpn ~ Imagine that I could accomplish my goal Thanx. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Emerald depths now filled with jealousy burn with cold light I went off on a tangent when I read your poem..and about 5 variations came into my head at once... including a long tale of how emerald was formed...... perhaps I will even write some of them down..( chuckling) Point... well... other words and images have a great effect on us...and we are touched by and blessed with the chance to see through anothers eyes the world around.. Not often said enough perhaps... but I appreciate the opportunity to see the world, feel the world through the poet... you and many others here have added to that experience immensly since I have been here.. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
(Interloper....psst.....they're brown) this is so beautiful makes me wish my eyes were green ~SEA |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
deep pools, green delight flecks of gold invite the night and hazel pulls me in there, now your friend has a name! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Ron ~ Deep appreciation for your comments and verse. SEA ~ Of course the SEA is green ... always. And maybe just now I am honored by her envy which is also green |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Decaflame ~ hazel is her name and to kid me is her game how I love her eyes |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
again, I would like to borrow this idea. . . if I may Sir?? I don't know if I can do as well as you, but I'd like to try!!! -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Sven ~ Borrow away my friend |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Beautiful! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
ENJOY |
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