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RSWells
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0 posted 2001-06-20 08:41 AM



Blood so freely flows
Camouflage deceptive thorn,
Lies beneath the rose.



© Copyright 2001 Richard S. Wells jr. - All Rights Reserved
Lady In White
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1 posted 2001-06-20 08:52 AM


Ouch.  Enjoyed!
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2 posted 2001-06-20 08:57 AM


Ah but all that is fair and beautiful is capable of causing pain..

Enjoyed this a great deal, nice image and wisdom beneath...


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3 posted 2001-06-20 09:04 AM


Excellent!  
ethome
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4 posted 2001-06-20 11:57 AM


I've heard this before and I agree...very good!
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Deep in the heart
5 posted 2001-06-20 12:35 PM


thin skin of beauty
sharp knife of unfettered tongue
shows reality

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