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To Make a Dream
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To Make a Dream |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Rewrite: To make a dream For you to make a fantasy, You take a day of pleasant sway, Add a touch of delicacy, A pinch or so of salt to stay. Savor it, in the deep of sleep Garnish it a sauce of power Then add a will, to wile its keep And it will bloom a phantoms hour. You may have summoned Galahad Or for some summoned a Venus Depending on descriptions add. To suit the dream to suit the genus. To make the recipe succeed, You must add essence to the store You must evade the seed of greed. Or dreams will end and close its door. For dreaming holds corrosive might Elusive as the ghosts of night. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
You may have summoned Galahad Or for some summoned a Venus Depending on descriptions add. To suit the dream to suit the genus. To make the recipe succeed, You must add essence to the store You must evade the seed of greed. Or dreams will end and close its door. For dreaming holds corrosive might Elusive as the ghosts of night. ================================== ahhh my poetic wizard of wise and rhyme another gem stone from your treasure box. Has your muse run off with mine Stinky? I'll bet Randy knows where they are.  *ww*  me |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I have often used this recipe, though mine is not quite so eloquently worded Another great poem Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Yes it has and one of these days I'm going to saddle up Randy and wisk you away. And we will escape to fantasy land. Please pass the raspberry tea. Winkiewinkie Stinky Elizabeth, I am afraid we are addicted to this tea and I can only wish you the happiest of dreams. Love Sy |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Addicts, unite! For I would write as you do, see? Except, alas I haven't any raspberry tea... big smiles! [This message has been edited by Lady In White (edited 06-20-2001).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Wonderfully done!!! Great pleasure in reading your works..and this is certainly no exception |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady, Have no fear I'll send you some. *L* Capt Hair, I can only thank you so much. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Dreams are such a relief to those that appreciate them...it's like the mind gets a workout and awakens to be refreshed again...very important to all of us...dreams! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethome, I agree and thank you for the nice comment. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I must need a new recipe... lately, my dreams haven't been worth closing my eyes! LOL. This is great, Seymour! *S* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ You are just WONDERFUL ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I almost missed this, whew! Glad I didn't  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Suthern, So glad to see your wonderful comments again *L* Marge, And you are a sweetheart. *L* Interloper, So am I. Thanks |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"To make the recipe succeed, You must add essence to the store You must evade the seed of greed. Or dreams will end and close its door." What a wonderful recipe Seymour ... and I do believe you added several cups of wisdom and talent ... for this is a gem! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kit, So glad you stopped by and so glad you liked the poem. Thank you dear friend. |
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