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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-06-20 07:18 AM



He Mattered Enough ...
~*Marge Tindal*~

Caressing winds of soft descent
blow across the chasm of heartache spent
Knowing full-well
that in memory's dwell
he just may come again
Free to flow into your thoughts
and leave again on a whim
Letting go - of letting go
but reeling the memory back in
Remembering why - with tear-filled eye
he mattered enough - to matter


~Inspired by Logan
And ... I thank you~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2001 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
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1 posted 2001-06-20 07:28 AM


I do so love walking down your memory lane..
you always write the most romantic verses from your pen of reminisce.
lovely Margie...and made even sweeter when inspired by another poets words  

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2 posted 2001-06-20 07:54 AM


Letting go of letting go....such Loving flow. Thank you.
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2001-06-20 07:58 AM


Nice Marge...James
Elizabeth Santos
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4 posted 2001-06-20 08:00 AM


THis one brought tears
Yoou've touch my heart with this beautiful presentation
Liz

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5 posted 2001-06-20 08:10 AM


Margie girl, wonderful beautiful writing girl,   You truly have written some magic here.

Absolutely fabulous I love it and you know I do adore the whole of this. Its presentation is excellent sister of my heart. Truly outstanding.
Take care
love as always
Mushy
  

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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6 posted 2001-06-20 09:24 AM


yes...to matter enough to be recalled, to reel the memories back in....

a most lovely write...

from a most lovely poetess...

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2001-06-20 09:57 AM


Marge,
I'm letting go with a thank you for a wonderful read. *L*

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8 posted 2001-06-20 10:34 AM


Aw, Margie... this one left me in tears... and is going into my library. Perhaps one day I can read it and see only the beauty... but that might be a while.
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9 posted 2001-06-20 11:10 AM


Logan inspired you so very well Marge!...

                            "Free to flow into your thoughts
                                and leave again on a whim
                                  Letting go - of letting go
                              but reeling the memory back in
                          Remembering why - with tear-filled eye
                              he mattered enough - to matter"

Love the completness of these lines...excellent Marge!

The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up
spaces of consciousness and resistance; to language oppressions; to
re-language historie

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10 posted 2001-06-20 11:13 AM


Marge-
   beautiful, my friend..
   just another reason i'm
   so happy to be back..

   hugs
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



Marge Tindal
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11 posted 2001-06-20 05:40 PM


JanetMarie~
My memory lane gets a little crowded sometimes ...
but, I wouldn't have it any other way.
Thank you, sweetie.

RSWells~
Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed it.

JamesMichael~
Thanks, sweetie.

Elizabeth~
Sometimes the teas of sweet remembrance
are just what we need.
*Hugs* to you.

MarshaLove~
Just my little heart ... with memory's footprints all over it.
Thank you, sweet sister.

LadyInWhite~
I thank you on all counts.
Your reply is special to me.

Seymour~
*softly smiling*
I thank you.

SuthernGal~
Sweet lady, I hope that day comes for you real soon.
*Hugs*

ETHome~
I thank Logan for spinning my thoughts in this direction.
I appreciate your reply.

Vicky~
Just one more reason for me to be glad you're back ! !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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12 posted 2001-06-20 09:04 PM


My stars, Marge, I MIGHT have inspired that, but I sure can't WRITE like that, geez, that was great...gentle smile
Marge Tindal
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13 posted 2001-06-20 09:11 PM


Logan~
Then just accept this big *HUG*
around your sweet neck !

Part of the beauty of this place is
gathering the sparks of another ...
thank you for the spark !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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14 posted 2001-06-20 09:19 PM


Marge, he mattered too much....sigh....I know this by heart.....love this and saving....
inot2B
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15 posted 2001-06-20 10:19 PM


Beauty in the words and beauty in the picture.
"he mattered enough - to matter",and that's all that matters.

Marge Tindal
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16 posted 2001-06-21 10:17 PM


OhSweetSEA~
I love it when I touch your heart,
softly enough to hear you *sigh*.
*Hugs*

INot2B~
Thank you so very much for letting me know you enjoyed it.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                               noles1@totcon.com             

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