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Open Poetry #14

Green Eyes....Senryu

Mote
Junior Member

since 2000-05-24

Posts 31

0 posted 2001-06-20 02:34 AM

Soft spells pull me in
like hand, to pools of passions
I can't resist green...

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

1 posted 2001-06-20 02:38 AM

There is something about green, isn't there

I like this very much

Maree

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2001-06-20 10:00 AM

I agree..this is very enjoyable in its simple form and with so much said in so few words

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

3 posted 2001-06-20 10:01 AM

I have green eyes...therefore, this is a keeper...

thank you!

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

4 posted 2001-06-20 10:42 AM

heh heh heh, powerful, yet succinct piece

speaks volumes, enjoyed your dilemma

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

5 posted 2001-06-20 11:01 AM

I agree with VAS!

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

6 posted 2001-06-20 11:55 AM

Green is good as is your senryu

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