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pres56 Junior Member
since 2001-06-09
Posts 28 |
For a shadow like a frozen rose in a snowy garden I struggles tward the warmth of light reaching for the sun, swaying in the breeze but never going anywhere |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Pres....this is so wonderful! The imagery...I have seen the frozen rose...and it is not a sunflower...which can always turn.... no, the rose, is definitely steadfast, and true... bravo! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Wow! Excellent work, pres56.  All writing comes |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
A frozen rose......... Wow.......would you believe that I have been trying to write something of the same title lately after seeing such a roze.....!! A very well-done piece........ Thank you ****************************** It's only me.......only me |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
pres- very beautiful imagery... thanks for sharing this. ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
yes, a perfect vision here. Sandra |
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