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VAS
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0 posted 2001-06-19 10:09 AM


Mount Rainier Midday
Virginia Salter

Mist rolls in
devours rocky crags. . .
regurgitates sharp peaks
in its wake.

© June 24,  2000

POWER TOWERS
Virginia Salter

Power towers taking a walk
over hill and dale
carrying buckets and power lines
cross the desert sand

Tripping through the wheat,
marching ‘tween the trees,
silhouetting skyline,
then sinking to valley floors.

A golden path or one of brown
they trek the countryside
looking much like living brooms
Sorceror’s-Apprentice empowered.

Arriving at a city
they crawl beneath the ground
then rise up on the other side
when heading out of town.

© June 24,  2000


© Copyright 2001 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
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Member Rara Avis
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1 posted 2001-06-19 02:06 PM


Beautiful imagery, V.  Beautiful.
VAS
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2 posted 2001-06-19 02:19 PM


Sanks you again, sweet Interloper!
Mote
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3 posted 2001-06-20 01:16 AM


VAS
You paint nice clear imagery, very nicely done.

Mote

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4 posted 2001-06-20 01:45 AM


Thanks, lots, Mote!!
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