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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California 
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IN CONTEMPT Ah, Night, she dances through the trees In mystery and quiet sway. By eyes of chance, it's me she sees And in her light, I dream away A world, alas, held in contempt; All actions once held indiscreet. ‘Tis but the lie my thoughts pre-empt In silent hopes that we could meet. She is my lover, first in line; She sings for me a sacred prayer. A litany I must consign My life unto - And would I dare Challenge grief o'er misconception? Not likely, on the slim chance I Might stumble on recollection. So surely that would damnify... ...My soul beyond all binding trust. And what reason for this denial? If evidence is what I must Obtain then here, now, end this trial!!! I would not stand for less than what I know in my heart to be true. But you, who act purely on thought, Let God alone then censure you. What evil is this you render Man to man? Tell me by what power You possess must I surrender The keys of life? In this, the hour Of bewitching; the world seems dark, Does it not? Yet it's me she spies -- Spies far and above all contempt. As on this journey I embark, Please note that it's but Hope that dies; And Night but falls upon a dream forewent. Michael Anderson [This message has been edited by Michael (edited 06-19-2001).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I do wish we would not post so close together...it's damned intimidating for me!!! But this...is deliciously goth--I love your command of the English language--damnify...I like that!!! Awesome, St. Michael, lol, you remain king of the hill! I read this one aloud...even at this time...they don't mess with mom when she reads poetry to herself in the wee small hours of the morn...so THANK YOU!!!! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Oh my! You know it's impossible to have a favorite Michael Anderson poem. They are just too numerous to have only ONE. But this one I really love - and when you get that book published (and I hope this is in it), please let me know so I can buy a copy or two. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The night, she dances through the trees In mystery and quiet sway. By eyes of chance, it's me she sees And in her light, I dream away A world, alas, held in contempt; All actions once held indiscreet. ‘Tis but the lie my thoughts pre-empt In silent hopes that we could meet. She is my lover, first in line; She sings for me a sacred prayer. A litany I must consign My life unto - And would I dare Challenge grief o'er misconception? Not likely, on the slim chance I Might stumble on recollection. So surely that would damnify... ========================================= may I ditto and echo all that sen says... for she states the truth of your poetry well... and then add...your writing is a lesson of sublime in cadence and rhyme. Also in intensity of emote. We can learn so much from this level of inspire and talent.  she said I dont know why you ever would lie to me |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I forgot to mention...that you have taught me more about about personification of the elements than any other poet here...so  back to the top with you boy!!!! lol |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Please note that it's but Hope that dies; And Night but falls upon a dream forewent - most excellent ending to a great poem. Cor |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is fine poetry. Sandra |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
michael- #1 i've missed you so much, where you been boy?? lol. secondly as always with your poetry i am simply in awe and amazed at the depth and level that you write. i too have learned so much from you as a poet...you are the king among king here in "poetry land" as our sweet janet would say...may you never tire of writing for i will never tire of reading you! more please take care. amy "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Serenity, lol - I think we're usually the only ones here in the wee hours of the morning to post anything... But you have nothing to be intimidated by, girl - your poetry is as powerful as ever. PdV, If I ever get a book published, you know you will not have to buy a copy - I'll hand deliver you as many as you'd like for free. Janet, thank you - your replies always make me smile... Corinne, thank you - I haven't seen you around much lately - where've you been? Sandra, I'm glad you enjoyed. Amy - I've been around, just not writing as much of late. I've missed you too, though, hope all is well with you. Thank you all for the kind replies. Michael |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
oman michael missed your work yuh i love this |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Michael, it is so good to read you again... Such excellent writing I had to hold my breath. Like Serenity I love the word "Damnify" oh and the ending lines..... Please note that it's but Hope that dies; And Night but falls upon a dream forewent. absolutely stunning! I enjoyed Maree |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Thank you, Walt, I always miss your craziness as well... And you too, maree, thanks for stopping by. Michael |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"I would not stand for less than what I know in my heart to be true. But you, who act purely on thought, Let God alone then censure you." Superb Michael. This is so compelling. The meter, sentiments, and language itself ... all wonderful. The flow just seemed to draw me along with a force all it's own. Really well done, much enjoyed! Best wishes, /Kit [This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 06-20-2001).] |
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