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inot2B
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0 posted 2001-06-19 12:33 PM




I released your hold over me
My heart was strong and in control
There was a time I let you go

As time passed you crept in my dreams
Filling my nights with how it felt
The first time you touched my lips
The heat that coursed through my body
As I let my tongue explore you

Realizing what was happening
I’m trying to resist temptation
While contemplating your seduction

I will know if you have won
When faced with the morning sun

© Copyright 2001 Toni Culberth - All Rights Reserved
JLR
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1 posted 2001-06-19 12:40 PM


Or you could just surrender and enjoy it...loved this much!
inot2B
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2 posted 2001-06-19 10:29 AM


JLR, I'm afraid this was the ravings of a woman who has been told to give up COFFEE, again. Now I don't know what to do with out my pick me up in the morning.
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3 posted 2001-06-19 06:47 PM


find another one. . .  

I could think of a few things. . .

I loved this. . . delightfully wicked. . .

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OLIAS
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4 posted 2001-06-19 06:52 PM


I've never seen a "cuppa" written about with such sensuality before, much enjoyed Thank you.

Regards,
Olias.

inot2B
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5 posted 2001-06-19 08:19 PM


Sven some things that I can think of as a pick me up in the morning actually makes me very very tired.
OLIAS I just really love my caffine, wish it felt as loving towards me.

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