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Roller Coaster Poster Boy...thanks to deVine
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Roller Coaster Poster Boy...thanks to deVine |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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Roller coaster poster boy Frightens friend just for joy Shakes her as they climb so high Tells her that they all could die He calms her that he did inspect Every crack and huge defect Look at how the loops will sway Looks as if it’s judgment day Close your eyes and you’ll be sick But really that’s a sneaky trick For at the time your going up Is quiet time for throwing up Clackety clackety clackety clack Guess there is no turning back Look your face is turning white Dizzy at this swelling height Don’t look down, wait, what is that? Looks as if you’ve lost you’re hat I was kidding about your hat Looks like vomit will go splat Here we are the biggest drop Look! a lever to make it stop ONLY KIDDING, HERE WE GOOOOOOOO You raise your arms to heaven knows Your hair is whipping in the breeze For as we pull a couple gees Round and round and up and down Soon we both will kiss the ground I asked you how you liked the ride You couldn’t keep it all inside We jumped the line and ran on back To ride the rails of coaster track Every time we reach the top And gaze upon that awesome drop We reach, in fun, for phantom lever And face our fears as friends forever [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 06-19-2001).] |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
OMG rotflmao...or maybe that shoud be PMGU (puking my guts up)I LOVE roller coasters |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
walt- lol...loving this one!! sounds like fun to me!  thanks for the smile and the chuckle.. ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I was on ONE once. Never again. If I want the stuffing scared out of me, I'll just look in the mirror!!! Cute Walt..well done!  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
oh walt. . . that's mean!!! LOL I love this one. . . and deVine, you don't know what you're missing. . .  ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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cruz Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 282Dallas,Texas USA |
this is so cool. too bad many of the people who read this, wont get to ride tha coaster. but i guess weve all ridden ond like it. huh. your poem flows like the titan. quite smooth. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
What a wild ride, Walt! Cor |
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