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0 posted 2001-06-18 10:53 PM


Pushing The Needle Through
By: Noah Eaton
6/16/01

Pushing the needle through
Quilting a hale heresy
Wearing good-faith out on my sleeve
Joining in the march of good-will and liberty

Parlance in every thread
Badges ennoble what they mean
There is a coat of arms in everyone’s wardrobe
Suitable for the solicifious, try it on and see

Standing proud tandem with the pious
The Lord my greatest love and fraternal commodore
Salutations spoken thicker than blood
In dedicating oneself to love and succor

Weaving a decent direction
Cotterpin of imagination sought
A heart woven in patchwork
Checkered thoughts attaching me and God


© Copyright 2001 Nadia Lockheart - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-06-19 12:41 PM


Noah? I confess my vocabulary is lacking on this piece...but it does intrigue me with its pronounced stoicism...so? I add to my library to return when I am not so befuddled....okay...it might be awhile...I am so often befuddled...   but truly wanted to be more sure of the content, okay? okay!  
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2 posted 2001-06-19 02:08 AM


Enjoyed the phrases throughout this piece.  Nicely woven.

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3 posted 2001-06-20 10:47 PM


Noah,

   The thing I hate about having no time to stop in as much as I like is missing the poets I like to try to follow Your poems always catch my eye and interest and this one is no different I'm so glad I had time to be able to look through and find it.. enjoyed muchly

TaraB

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